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CountSixstring — Collecting Dust
Published: 2005-03-13 03:03:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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I gave me up for all the pretty lights.I've lost myself for good.
All my old friends withered to dust on me.
I shouldv'e known they would.
I've broken my back while I've healed my scars.
And I put my razor down.
I'm sick of idiocy and retardation.
But I try my best not to clown.
The world won't stop and I'm not going.
I've healed up inside.
But my bleeding scars ain't showin' that.
I'm sick of it, sick of it all.
My only direction is to fall.
My patience and life are on the edge and my acoustic's
.....collecting dust in the corner.
Forget the tune, screw the missing string.
Yeah that's what I said.
Now I think I've lost it forever.
My first happiness is dead.
I blew my brains out with a pistol called school.
The bullets were pure gold.
All these years gone down the drain.
Depression's getting old.
The world won't stop and I'm not going.
I've healed up inside.
But my bleeding scars ain't showin' that.
I'm sick of it, sick of it all.
My only direction is to fall.
My patience and life are on the edge and my acoustic's
.....collecting dust in the corner.
Comments: 2
It's so much better in writing than over the phone (but if you don't fix those damned typos I'm-a pop a cap in yo ass >.<
XD The lovechild of AHHHAHAHAHA!
Oh, oh dear... okay...
But seriously. I love the whole thing. It's very good. Just keep writing. It'll do you good.
We need to work on the rhythm of the chorus' ending. We need less speed at the end. You rush through the words because there are too many. I'll help you with that, okay?
Hey, people, if you're reading this, Ping says this will probably be his last song like this. What do you think? Should he never write another song like this? Hmm... Maybe, I think, he should take a break from it for a while and write them every so often.
You need a way to vent that won't get you shot.
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