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Published: 2007-05-15 15:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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The Final BluesIf I told you I found God
Would you wonder where I looked?
Can you see the green of the trees?
I’m sure they can see the green in you.
The bloody and rusted fairgrounds come to life.
The living and breathing politics slowly rot the air.
The angels in Memphis play the devil’s music.
The nosy bystanders can’t stand the smell.
Introspective mouths are always outside.
Watch as the world turns the wrong way and burns.
The color of your insides is dark and yellow.
Your mouth runs with legs of a marathon man.
Your brain has become ink and paper.
The teeth in your mouth are sharp.
The tongue in your words is a bland canvas.
All I can hear is white noise.
This noise comes without a sound.
Liberating insecurity without a secure connection.
Jump right in
The water’s quite nice.
Our hearts may grow as our minds shrink,
But everything has a happy medium.
The water is blue because of the sky.
What would the sky look like if the ocean were blood?
Even vampires can’t benefit from the liquor in veins,
Nor the Devil, the Joker, or the Thief.
The colors of the town are draining into the sewers.
The sand man has hung himself on Beale Street.
Jump fight in.
The water’s quite nice.
You’re yellow.
You’re tainted.
You’re sleepy.
You’re fainting
You’re smiling.
You’re laughing.
You’re tearing up.
You’re gasping.
I’m dying.
I’m laughing.
It’s scary.
It’s happy.
I’m nauseous.
I’m fine.
I’m screaming
It’s sublime
There’ll be blood.
There’ll be insects.
There’ll be street fights.
There’ll be casual sex.
We’re sick.
We’re shining.
We’re drowning.
It’s time.
Hold my hand
As the bubbles go up.
We can’t see anything.
There’s no need.
Don’t fight it my friend.
It’ll be over soon.
Let’s sink to the bottom.
The blood’s just fine.
Comments: 3
duckie2318 [2007-05-17 23:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow Submissions like this makes me glad I watch you. Ping this is simply amazing. I really love the metaphors. Your writing is fantastic. Never stop!
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CountSixstring In reply to duckie2318 [2007-05-18 17:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Gaaaaah Thank you so much
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bite-insane-iam [2007-05-15 21:16:50 +0000 UTC]
i bet the end of the world would be somethin like this
half the people knowing
half of them not and going about there day as the humans they are
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