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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s — Open To Be
Published: 2012-06-14 22:22:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Open My Eyes
To See you
And all the air sea, sky, and earth
that you are

Open My Eyes
To Know you
And be without my insecurities
my guilt and my fears

Open My Eyes
To Hear you,
Your voice all around me, ocean laughter, your forest murmur,
your thunderous roar, your scorching breath on, desert sands
And your Earthy Melodies

Open My Eyes
                 To Be

in truth, in simplicity
and To Be, completely....

                                                                                 
                                                                                  Free.
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Comments: 11

jezza01 [2013-01-15 03:25:44 +0000 UTC]

I reckon its pretty good really love the closing stanza

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to jezza01 [2013-01-16 04:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you!

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jezza01 In reply to Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s [2013-01-16 09:15:37 +0000 UTC]

^.^ really its okay , that last line just completely grabbed me and went

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to jezza01 [2013-01-31 22:44:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL Awesome! I'm glad it did!

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jezza01 In reply to Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s [2013-02-03 21:48:22 +0000 UTC]

its a very clever line, especially how the poem continues on well done

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to jezza01 [2013-02-15 01:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks SO much again!
XD I don't know how long it'll be til the next poem, but yeah.

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jezza01 In reply to Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s [2013-02-15 07:28:16 +0000 UTC]

no problems

that's okay, will await you're next artwork with anticipation

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to jezza01 [2013-02-16 20:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow....you're too nice!! XD I'll watch for yours!

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jezza01 In reply to Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s [2013-02-17 08:57:07 +0000 UTC]

lol not really its just the way I am to be honest

haha okay, we'll both watch out for one anothers artworks then

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to jezza01 [2013-03-25 02:12:57 +0000 UTC]

There's no better way to be.
Sounds good. Sorry for my slow responses!

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jezza01 In reply to Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s [2013-03-26 04:18:17 +0000 UTC]

hahaa lol and so true

and that's alright I've been quite busy myself so all in all... we're probably responding around the same time period

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