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Published: 2012-01-13 03:49:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description OK, so this one is pretty recent, and it's yet another drawing of my favourite charrie Breiss from my story Breiss Christane (I know I know, stupid title -- it's open to change, as I have not decided the official title). I drew it using pencils and smudgies, though I feel I need to brush up on my shading, proportions and overall neatness. Ah well, as I go along it should improve! (As well as my skills in using that darned scanner)
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SquirrelGirl15 [2012-01-22 22:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'm going to critique this one Cause it's cool!

My first reaction was "oooh! This is cool!" I looove the pose!! I also like the hair and her wings I think you could have made the leaves of the tree a bit higher up so there's more sky visible, cause right now, it looks almost as if her head is going to crash into the tree I also think you could have made the wings a bit bigger and more obvious, cause at first I didn't notice them, and they're so cool, so make them visible Also, great job with the wrinkles in the clothes!!! I also like all the soft shading you did, although I think you could add some to the girl's face, because everything else is shaded except her skin. I also think you could shade the leaves of the tree a bit more.
All in all, epic work! Keep it up

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Cr3at1v1tyL1v3s In reply to SquirrelGirl15 [2012-01-29 00:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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