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Crazed-In-Theory — Disappearance of Hatsune Miku
Published: 2011-05-03 00:01:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 3458; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 86
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All what we were keeping wasWhat we saw in the flicker this future world
All the lying is showing us and disappearing
If I can use a song to tell you everything I want to say
It's a compressed song for the time for me to say good-bye...
-Hatsune Miku, The Disappearance of Hatsune Miku
Such a sad song. TAT;;
This actually originally began as a simple doodle while listening to 'The disappearance of Hatsune Miku', but ended up being a 22+ hour drawing. How, I will never know. OTL;
...and you know my obsession with listening to music while drawing? Yeah. I listened to that song almost always when working on this. I MEMORIZED THE LYRICS. Except...they're way to fast, so I have to slow it down a lot...BUT STILL. QAQ;
So yeah. A lot of strange expirimental stuff in here. Forshortening, drawing both hands, a strange hatching type shading, inking that took me like a bajillion hours, and of course, DRAWING THOSE PIGTAILS. Please Miku, I beg of you, change the hair style. It's pretty effin' hard to draw. TAT;
Time: 22+ Hours
Miku Hatsune and Vocaloid (c) Yamaha (Rlly? oAo
Art (c) Nicole Geenen/Crazed-In-Theory
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Comments: 39
As a fan of Vocaloid, I had to favorite this. I really like this, and I'll explain it.
How the piece is seen is striking. You kept the continuity with the "wind." Most people will just do random "ups and swirls," but you made her tie, her hair, and her skirt fly up in the same way. Adding the file name and the percentage just added to the amazement of this piece. The colors are really reflective on the subject of "death" or "leaving."
The originality is low because we've all seen it before. Although, it is a much better piece than others I've seen, it's rather cliche. I'd actually rather see a picture based on a song not as popular as this one. Again, it is very good, but not very original.
The technique is a little failing here and there. As for the foreshortening, as the hand gets closer to you, it gets closer to the face. The shading is also a little misplaced on the head and upper torso. With the shading you have everywhere else, it would make more sense to have the shading directly below the hair, head, shirt, etc. I congratulate you on doing as well as you did on the hands, but they aren't proportioned well. The hands are usually as large or larger than the face, and you got that down. The hand would actually be a bit larger, and it's pretty close to the size it would be!
As for the impact, I only have one word for it: cliche. After seeing as many of these pictures as I do, it kinda got a little drab seeing about the same thing. It didn't really cause me to feel any strong emotions or give me the impression that she is reaching out to me for help. The facial expression made me feel a little of that, but not much. I challenge you to make a background next time, and that will make a picture much more effective in impacting your viewers.
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Thanks so much for you critique~<3 It's actually the first one I have ever gotten. :'D
I very much agree with practically everything you said here. Much of it, I had realized after I already inked everything, unfortunately. D: Especially the forshortened hand. orz;;
Yes. Background. -heavy sigh-. I had a lot of thought about doing on, but was scared to mess it up, and I had no clue what type of background I could do.
And yes, Very cliche Idea. I knew it from the start, actually. XD I'll definately try to put more emotion in it too~!
Thanks again,
Nikki <3
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You're very welcome~ :3
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D'awwww. Thanks so much~! <3
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Duh-huh. :3 ;;Super Cute Happy Voice/Face;;
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...I love you too~! ouo;;?
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lol what's with the question mark? You are not quite sure you love me? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM *gives an incredulous look*
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LOL NO! It's just pretty random that you come on to a new deviation and tell me you love me lol.
I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH TINE DEAR.
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Interesting laugh you got there Justine. Bwewheehehehehhe! oAo;
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D'aww thanks~<3
DON'T DIE. *revives you* that'll be my third strike, man~! oAo;
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Haha yush, What Am I gonna Do?Q.Q
X3
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This is good oAo... If you want constructive criticism: Work on anatomy(Of the face, body, and hands). :3
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Thanks~!
IK. I hate how, at first, I was super proud of this, and then I realized how crappy it actuaslly is. Fuck. /shakefist
NEED. TO PRACTICE. ANATOMY. ;-;
FFFFFFFFFFF. I've looked at it too longggggg.
XDDDD
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That happens to me all the time, too. Like, I finish a drawing, then look back at it and be like "WTF IS THIS?" T_T
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IK. WAHHH. *cries, crawling away into a hole*...I'm going to go sulk now...
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Don't you dare go emo on me! Or so help me I will rip your intestines out and use them as a condom while I fornicate with your skull.
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...THAT SOUNDS FUCKIN' NICE. *angsts everywhere* ANGSTANGSTANGST.
...I'm in an emo, 'I suck at drawing' mood. Fuck. My. Life.
*bangs head against desk*
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*grabs you* *throws against wall and cuts open your stomach to rip out your organs* BITCH WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO MAKE A HO SMILE? *reroutes your brain to where you can only be happy*
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....ANGST....
...SO MUCH DAMN ANGST...
Well I dunno...what's going on? If i could only get some damn motivastion for somethin-
MOTHERS DAY.
FUCK. YESH! TOUCHING COMIC STRIP AND CARD. HAND DRAWN. FOR MOM. FUCK YEAH.
ANGST.
GONE.
FUCK. YEAH.
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Two words...
Well
More
But
First:
Fuck.
You.
SECOND:
Ilove...it. :3 There, two words
It's gorgeous
The shading is wonderful, the coloring is beautiful, the only thing that looks the least bit awkward are the wrinkle marks right under her chest. They look a tiny bit out of place.
But other than that, this is absolutely amazing.
GOODJOB,BABY:3
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;u; Fuck you too~<3
Really?
Yeah, that annoyed me too. It's times like those when I really wish that ctrl+Z existed IRL. But it doesn't, so now, I sob. xD;;
Thanks so much Tori Love~! You're way too sweet~! <333
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<3 [:
YESH REALLY D:<
Ahaha, I know right? But like I said, that is the only thing that is the least bit awkward. [: -huggle- No sobbing XD
You are quite welcome, Nikki Darling [: Ahaha, nu. XD<33
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<33
OMG YAY.
Really? Otherwise you think it's nice? ;u; -huggle- BUT I HATE THAT. I ALWAYS DO THAT MAN. oAO;
OHOHOO~! You are tooooo! <3
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Yes, really, babe! It's gorgeous!
I don't normally draw the wrinkles -probably should but doesn't- BUT think about it in your head. The position she's in, the way she's facing. If she's facing you, then the only wrinkles should really be around the hips. But, if her body's facing away from you, but her face is visible, then there should be the wrinkles you have now.
I have no idea if any of that made sense, but I hope it does XD
D:< Well...ifyousaysou-u
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-Just realized she didn't reply to that-
So, because, if your facing me, it doesn't mean the wrinkles on your tummy/chest disappear, therefor they stay there. Now that I look at it, the wrinkles have to shape/pattern anyway, so they are all off and wrong. But there would be wrinkles on your tummy/places besides the hips. XD
At least that's what my sister told me....and she's taken art classes. LMFAO. She might just be...a troll....;-;
Yeah. XD
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I really like this I also like how you did the shirt
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