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N:phew just finished today....really proud of the coloring on this one, especially on the clover king. so many details on this pic XD gunna go draw some more to relieve some of the hand cramps i have.
can you figure out whose in this pic? haha doubt you can XD lol whoever does wins the internet O3O
for some reason i like the sketch of the other one a lot better.... o well...
hmmm.... many mistakes as well of course.... anatomy anatomy anatomy why must you hate me so?
i do not own vocaloid
i do own the art and characters
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N:thank you ^^ for the complements and critique.
yes i agree with you completely on the width and depth issue, actually this picture falls flat bacause of the monotone colors in the backround XD lol as for the anatomy i also realize that there are many problems with that but at least im trying XD lol alright i suppose your right on that account to, i havent had any actual training on how to draw so im not really surprised that this picture fell a bit flat XD o well better luck next time right?
anyway, no i do not go to an art school, and that would be great XD i havent found many decent sites for reference lol really i didnt really think that helps, does it really? it seemed pretty cool to try tho XD so i guess i can try it out
thanks for the links XD im sure they'll help XD. youve been a great help!! thank you very much XD
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Your super welcome! 
better. If you use reference you're square to go!!! That's right! I know if you visit
those links and go through those tutorials I gave you. You'll be a hack of a lot better
next time!! Good Luck!! 
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N:hahha yep i just recently learned yesterday XD lol sweet then ill do my best to master the 'art' of reference XD (see wat i did there?XD) thanks XD and yes i will XD
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Lol Your funny. I think I'll enter your contest if that's ok?
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N:lol no just cheesy XD woah seriously? that would be awsome XD id be honored!!
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Sweet then! Lets DO IT!!
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This must have taken quite a bit of work. There's definitely a lot going on in this image. I'm not familiar with the characters of Vocaloid, so my critique is going to be limited to technique. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
To me, one of the strongest- if not the strongest- is how you've drawn the character wearing green. I think you did a great job on shading his hair, especially the green tints at the tips. His body also seems to be about the right size for his head.
The blonde/blue haired character is interesting and the blue-stained pieces of sheet music make for a fun touch. I'd watch out for the size of the body in relation to the character's head, though. I think if you had made the shoulders a little broader, and the torso just a hair bit wider, he(?) would have looked much more proportional. A slightly thicker arm that showed evidence of the different widths of the upper arm and forearm would have further helped.
Something I find helpful, is to remember that size-wise, a person's hand covers most of their face, It's a quick way to check and see if that is proportional.
I think your facial anatomy is pretty good and you have a strong composition in the front, with the green character and blue character. I'd maybe not have quite so many small details on the sides, since it slightly distracts from other areas of the drawing.
Anyways, although I am unfamiliar with Vocaloid, I think you've created a very interesting and colorful piece of fan art, and I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work!
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N:hehe well your see with this drawing i used my oc's rather than the actual vocaloids themselves ^^" and yes most of the process did take quite a bit of work ^^" thank you for appreciating that and giving me such a wonderful critique ^^
yes i also think so as well, although that was just a mistake to have a character that is stronger than the rest ^^ not that i'm complaining of course ^^ oh and thank you i usually has a hard time doing side profiles so im glad that it came out like this ^^
thank you ^^ oh thank you for the helpful tip!! i keep wondering what i should do to help the anatomy and that helps a lot!! thank you ^^( and yes its a he XD sorry but a bunch of the guys i draw are really grily looking XD )
thank you for the complement and helpful tip, and your great tips in general ^^
why thank you very much ^^and yes i will do my best in the future and i promise to improve ^^
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Ah, okay! 
^^ I think it can be hard to not end up with one character standing out more than others. It helped, too, that he's so much in the foreground of the drawing.
No problem! I find it difficult getting the head and body proportional in relation to one another as well.
You're welcome! I'm glad I was able to offer some tips.
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N: well thank you very much ^^ (actually the reason they look so...distorted is cuz its to fit the song more XD)
yeah thats true ^^ always happens in a picture XD and again thank you ^^
hehe anatomy always gets the best of artists XD haha yes as am i (thank God...) really? ive heard that was helpful several time before, i might try and ask a few of my teachers then ^^ lol its okay its kinda a normal thing really XD
and i was glad to recieve such wonderful insight ^^//
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N: really? thats so cool XD
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God, I love all the colours and action in this. It's very vibrant and stands out wonderfully. However, the characters seem to lack depth - shading would perhaps help to make each figure work on its own rather than sort of just fading in with the others.
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N: haha thank you ^^, alirght thank you
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it does indeed look a lot more finished now that it's all inked and colored. You asked for me to tell you where to improve so here it is: the person in the middle is a bit difficult to see next to the creepy doll thing if you could use a lighter shade of gray for the doll that would help not only with that but with pulling the doll out of the background ^_^ I love the skulls on the music notes but it is difficult to see them when they're so dark and the background is so dark, when I work digitally I like to temporarily shift to black and white to make certain that things are easy to see (I understand that you're working traditionally but if you can imagine...) one of your previous commenters said that the green clubs character is the strongest by far as far as coloring and line art goes I really like the crosshatching in the eyes and it would be nice to see that elsewhere
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N:haha thank you ^^ sorry but what person in the middle are you talking about XD;; the characters are all over the place so its hard to know which are which 
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Sorry for doing a horrid job specifying(lack of sleep will do that to you): The little one with the black hair and brown vest.I mean to say that cross-hatching looks great for a visual way of identifying shadows and adds an interesting thingy to look at
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N:sokay no worries
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try to mold your crosshatching so that the lines follow the object and change how many lines are in one area to suit the difference in lighting
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N:alright i think i got it
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My critique are kind of harsh so I limit myself to good job.
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N: actually i dont really mind if the critique is hard or not, actually i kno i made planety of mistakes in this and if you could help me with those it would mean a lot ^^ and thank you very much ^^
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this is pure epicness! OwO i could just look at it all day!
oh and um what parts of anatomy are you have problems with? i had borrowed a book on learning to draw manga and it helped me a lot in my anatomy, maybe you should do the same or maybe i could help
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N: thank you bro!! XD lol i got sick of it after i scanned it...blehh....
the limbs mostly their proportions they....are...evil...
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hmmm i see, im not i can help with that cuz i have the same problem lol XD im mostly for the head and shoulders lol [i have difficulty drawing legs D: they are my sworn enemy]
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N: lol ME TOO XD just try and make the shoulders are wider in length than the width of the head
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yeah hehe ^u^
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Ah! You've gotten so much better! Im in love with your art style
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N: oh thank you very much !! 
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No need to thank me ^^ Thank you
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N: heheh no problem ^//^
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This is just sooooo awesome I don't even know how to express in words...Me GUSTA!
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N: hehe thanks XD
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holy shit my mind has just blown! I'm so jelly! (I hate using that term!)
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N: lol BOOM XD sorry about that let me fix it for you XD (then dont use that term XD) and thanks XD but why should you b jelly (XD) i love you drawing skills so much ><
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ahaha! LOLZ! well, I just LOVE the way u color and I suck so bad! and the effort that's put into your drawings are just amazing u know? that's y I'm... Jelly *twitches @ the word*
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N:lol thanks XD not you dotnDX i love the coloring you do its really cute!! DX. lol thanks im glad it shows ^^// (then dont use the dam word XD)
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I can't help it! it's cuz of my stupid friend! and I can't get over how much effort u do in ur pic! ah~ mikhail... y can't u stop bein a lazy ass?
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N:lol gl w/ tht then :3 lol thank you XD haaahh.... mikkhail just drink coffee...
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it's useless! coffee just stunts my growth even MORE!
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N:lol then....defibrillator lol jkjk please dont use tht
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ahahahahaha! LOLZ! XD naw... I won't use it~ u just seem to inspire me constantly u know nicchi?
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N:lol good XD really? that just made my day knowing that someone that inspires me does to me as well ^^// thanks you made my day
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O SHIT! I INSPIRE U?! ahhh~ now I'm happy too~ I'll work harder to impress u cuz my pics look so bland @ times. I wanna be where ur @!
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N: yeah big time
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