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I know how you feel... I'm too scared to read what I wrote back then and I wrote them all (usually) in one go. And now I spend weeks for just 1000 words
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Well, experience is the best way to improve writing! Thanks for the feedback and good luck with future writing!
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After Reading This I Feel Like What Ive Been Doing For Two Years Now Is Within the guidelines of this Guide!
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For the most part! You're definitely a great writer!
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Thanks,
You Are A Fantastic Writer Yourself, And I look forward to what you put out!
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I'll keep this in mind for future stories
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Alright, hope it helps!
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thanks. i also wrote a squeak squad story. go take a look at it
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What do you think about this one?
pokemorphomega.deviantart.com/β¦
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I think it's a great start! And it looks like you've already found the writing style and TF type that works for you.
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That's great then ^^. I'm still unsure about my writing style, but I guess it isn't as bad as I thought
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Just keep at it, whatever it is will improve over time.
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Danke. Sehr gut. Hat mich inspiriert
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Ich bin froh! Viel GlΓΌck!
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Not that I'd write about it to begin with, but who says mind changes should only phase in at the end of a transfiguration? Considering how they are considered a gradual thing, I figure it'd kick in gradually throughout the sequence, slowly changing the character's mindset via the tone of the character's thoughts and reactions. Hell, the hypnosis people seem to set in mind alternation right at the forefront.
I personally feel that making reference as to what the TF results in via things like "(Subject name here TF)" in the title is a little gimmicky, like it's making it too obvious as to what people are coming for. In my eyes, good writing even with TF-related stuff means you should come for the story, stay for the TF. Not that I'm entirely opposed to it, but I'd make it like the first line in the description or a short disclaimer at the start of the story's deviation format.
Also, who said stories with the Pokemon legendaries had to be dark?
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Well⦠these things I'm saying aren't really concrete or anything. Mind change can easily be implemented during the TF, but I'm saying that the more instant brand of it isn't always best for prior.
And I guess I should've touched up Step 5 there⦠I guess I tried to do that when I said "so don't hide it from the title, description, tags, and story itself", but you are right, the description is a good place to explain.
And the Legendaries thing is just an example, I suppose poorly implemented.
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I read this guide a while ago butβ¦. back then I was too shy to write anything.
So Iβm doing this right now.
Goods Sir this guide is accurate in 100% I studied it day after day to remember your hintβs and I worked hard on to develop my writing style properly.
It was even harder for me because English isnβt my native language, andΒ I never had any professional lessons from it.
(My basic training before self-teaching myself involved watching Cartoon Network and playing in text based games with vocabulary on my lap as a kid).
Anyway instead of sucking up to you il present you the results of my training and following your guide.
All the replies that were write from me were made thanks to you. I wonder what you think about quality of my repliesβ.
Β comments.deviantart.com/1/5801β¦
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Wow, I'm⦠flattered! You're already at a great start, and I'm glad the guide helped you with it so much!
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Oh believe me sir I still had much to learn. 
Β Again thank you so much and I hope that one day I would have a pleasure to have an Rp with you. ^v^
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Well, I'm glad. Maybe we could RP sometime.
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^v^ definietly i will look forward to that////!
Oh before i forget, here is osmething funny for you.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6MeUsβ¦
www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRjqw4β¦
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Let me know when you're up for it, I already have 2 public RPs opened up.
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Yes i had read them already, the Ama Jicmin Rp sounds promising.
Yet in rules I read that you donβt allow animals and anthros and those are my favorite subjects to transform into.
As for Super Smash Bros, I never played in it and I have no clue about the game mechanics so Iβm afraid that my lack of experience in that game would completely destroy the pace and entire Rp for both of us.
So for now I pass, Iβm patient person so I will wait until you decided to open new TF\Rp.
Still thank you for proposition I fell flattered that you noticed someone like me.
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Ah⦠understandable. We'll see next time, then.
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I've been thinking about writing a tg story for a while, but I had no idea what to do, so thanks
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My pleasure, glad to be a help there!
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Great advice there. This will probably help me if I decide to do more TF stories!
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Glad it could help, that's why I wrote the guide!
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This is great advise. TF stories are one of the few stories like that involve a fetish. I like it as a interest becauseΒ the thought of turning into
something different is a freighting thing if you look into it, makes for a great horror story full of suspense and atmosphere.Β
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Glad you liked it!
(personally, I've never seen it as a fetish⦠and I tend to steer clear of darker stuff)
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Nice XD. its neat to meet someone who doesn't see it as a kink. it s an interesting concept on its own and its very entertaining.
I Should check out some of your work.
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Well, feel free. Just don't expect very much dark contentβ¦
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Sure thing. and that's alright lighter stuff is still nice.
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It's pretty accurate owo. And I totally agree with you on the last point when you've mentioned about looking back onto your previous stories.
Make a TF story you can look back on and say. "Damn this was good." And not "Damn this was popular."
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You know my TF stories have been kinda lackluster as of late but this has some really good points that I think would liven them up a little bit more, give them that sorta...pep and vigor...that they were missing
Good advice man, I even took a little peek through your stories and yeah, you definitely know what you're doing. Keep up the good work
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Thanks! And I hope it helps!
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Thank you for this! This is going to be really helpful for me.
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Well, I hope it helps you make something great! Have fun writing it, too!
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Very good advice man ^w^
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