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Published: 2006-01-16 14:01:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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On white paper I am a charcoal faceNose drawn with a thin pencil
Eyes blank, erased
Among smudges of indecision
Shadowing the wrong place
No sense of anatomy
Nor overtones of subtle grace
Scratching sounds surround
Accompanied by dryness
Tangles filling up a space,
Mind going through a phase
Hand moving in a daze,
With an unfocused gaze
A lack in accuracy
Based on security
No depth or motion
Colorless
All is typical and simple:
Lifeless
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Comments: 10
NoRou [2006-09-14 19:26:26 +0000 UTC]
Hah! You are cooler than I knew you where!!
Suddenly I feel so simple...
Can I hug you??!!
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crazypotatoeOo In reply to NoRou [2006-09-14 19:31:58 +0000 UTC]
I'll have to think about it won't I...
joking
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SenselessDancer [2006-01-21 00:51:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this piece is amazing!! I can imagine myself in a sketch book looking up at the artist trying to draw me (my imagination is constantly on overload, so I expand on the ideas I view). But the language, and discription of the angles and shape of the persons face... they are truely amazing!! Beautiful!
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crazypotatoeOo In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-01-21 13:22:46 +0000 UTC]
ah yes what a fantastic imagination, it makes my writing seem better...
...I'll admit something: Actually, I wasn't that pleased with this when I had first written it
Let's just say I've changed my mind now
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SenselessDancer In reply to crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-21 22:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, good Because this is a brilliant piece. I
it!
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AuthenticLogic [2006-01-18 06:15:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow...
No feedback would justify this one...
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crazypotatoeOo In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-01-18 12:26:46 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe you...
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