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Published: 2012-02-05 21:37:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 306; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description Now you're gone
So why am I still hanging on?
You're with her
Our memories together are starting to blur

What happened to us?
How did I ever lose your trust?
Tears can't erase
The memory of the smile on your face

My heart is broken
The memory of your love my only token
I don't know what to do
Except say that I still love you….
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Comments: 16

newkidwithoutbraces [2012-07-24 08:11:07 +0000 UTC]

How about "(Still) Hanging On" for a title.
And this is very touching, hun.

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CreativeAsian In reply to newkidwithoutbraces [2012-08-08 15:23:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun. I like that title a lot better than the one up there

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newkidwithoutbraces In reply to CreativeAsian [2012-08-09 09:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Glad you liked it, honey.

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CreativeAsian In reply to newkidwithoutbraces [2012-09-20 20:29:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah. sadly i havent had time to do anything. I've been way too busy with school work (mostly chemistry and geometry).

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newkidwithoutbraces In reply to CreativeAsian [2012-09-21 12:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh fun lol how are they going for you?

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CreativeAsian In reply to newkidwithoutbraces [2012-10-09 16:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Everything is going pretty good I'm surviving Geometry with a B with I'm proud of that since math subjects just really aren't my thing

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newkidwithoutbraces In reply to CreativeAsian [2012-11-03 12:07:54 +0000 UTC]

A B's good, m'dear How have you been mylovelly. Haven't spoken to you in a very long time. Are you by any chance doing NaNoWriMo this year?

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CreativeAsian In reply to newkidwithoutbraces [2012-11-07 20:47:37 +0000 UTC]

I've been doing pretty well lately considering having some crappy grades. There is a new love interest in my life....haha don't know how that will turn out but I'll let you know. And what is that?

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jcgirlsly3510 [2012-02-09 05:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Good poem.
Writing and faking it with other friends. You'll forget him and have a good time.

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CreativeAsian In reply to jcgirlsly3510 [2012-02-09 20:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

I sure hope that I do forget him and soon! I've become obsessed with eating sweets especially ice cream (coffee flavored)...

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Len-Len-hearts [2012-02-05 21:39:43 +0000 UTC]

I, too.

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CreativeAsian In reply to Len-Len-hearts [2012-02-05 21:43:40 +0000 UTC]

yeah...

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GlamBanshee [2012-02-05 21:38:49 +0000 UTC]

I understand.

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CreativeAsian In reply to GlamBanshee [2012-02-05 21:43:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks...it feels good to have someone who does

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GlamBanshee In reply to CreativeAsian [2012-02-05 21:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely. And I vent by writing poems too....

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CreativeAsian In reply to GlamBanshee [2012-02-05 23:14:44 +0000 UTC]

same here it seems like the best way to express how you feel sometimes

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