fLOWsd [2007-06-10 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Excellent model, outfit and hair; nice light and exposure, good composition and impact (look+++). Good use of focal length (35 mm being the equivalent of a natural ~56 mm in full frame)
I would recommend to improve the focusing (focus on the eyes and either go for a larger or smaller aperture depending whether you want to increase or decrease the DOF, respectively, and depending on the quality of your glass), to add some sharpening (smart sharpen), make sure the WB is correct (there is an overall salmon pink like cast) and do a discreet skin softening on her left cheek. Other than that, you may wanna pick up a homogeneous background or defocus it to draw the attention on the eyes!
Good job; and she's a model you want to keep on working with

Wait, wait, wait, wait, what do you mean 'photographer - ~Krisarts'? You're not the photographer? So why do you post this and ask for suggestions? You're the designer?...Confusing! So if you're the designer, you may wanna to notice that her corset is totally out of focus and that there is a thread in her underarm. Great corset though, I love it!

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linenboy [2007-06-10 16:50:54 +0000 UTC]

You've done a great job here, with a very beautiful model.

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