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Published: 2007-06-10 16:49:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description model - Christal Skiver
photographer - ~Krisarts

NOTE: I am not a modeling photographer, but if anyone has advice I am more than happy to hear it! Thanks.
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Comments: 6

fLOWsd [2007-06-10 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Excellent model, outfit and hair; nice light and exposure, good composition and impact (look+++). Good use of focal length (35 mm being the equivalent of a natural ~56 mm in full frame)
I would recommend to improve the focusing (focus on the eyes and either go for a larger or smaller aperture depending whether you want to increase or decrease the DOF, respectively, and depending on the quality of your glass), to add some sharpening (smart sharpen), make sure the WB is correct (there is an overall salmon pink like cast) and do a discreet skin softening on her left cheek. Other than that, you may wanna pick up a homogeneous background or defocus it to draw the attention on the eyes!
Good job; and she's a model you want to keep on working with

Wait, wait, wait, wait, what do you mean 'photographer - ~Krisarts'? You're not the photographer? So why do you post this and ask for suggestions? You're the designer?...Confusing! So if you're the designer, you may wanna to notice that her corset is totally out of focus and that there is a thread in her underarm. Great corset though, I love it!

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CreativeConceptions In reply to fLOWsd [2007-06-12 06:51:37 +0000 UTC]

i am the photographer and i am also krisarts i have multiple accounts on here for multiple different reasons if you want to see my nature account is

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fLOWsd In reply to CreativeConceptions [2007-06-12 16:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Multiple accounts, you must be a VIP then

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CreativeConceptions In reply to fLOWsd [2007-06-13 08:20:48 +0000 UTC]

nope just very addicted to this site lol my other ones are poetry, fractals and other portraits i do on my own for fun

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linenboy [2007-06-10 16:50:54 +0000 UTC]

You've done a great job here, with a very beautiful model.

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CreativeConceptions In reply to linenboy [2007-06-10 16:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Those are comforting words! Lets me know I'm heading in the right direction!

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