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creeperlover — Beast Machines part 1
Published: 2007-09-07 14:59:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 543; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I change the story line from the show and everything will be from Sarah's point of view, sometimes I shall go into the details.

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I woke up with a huge headache. Where am I was the first question. I looked down and saw my beast mode. "Sarah maximize!" All I got was a shock. A sound of an engine was behind me and I turned around. Hundreds of tanks which had there guns pointing at me. "I am Sarah. I mean no harm." The tanks loaded ther guns so I began to run. I turned left, then right while looking at my surrounding. It was Cybertron.

When I lost the tanks, I lay down when I saw a gorrila, a cheeta and a rat aproaching me. "Optimus, Rattrap, Cheetor?" I stood up but they didn't saw me so I followed them. I ended up in a web, saw B.A and followed again. Why aren't they speaking to me? I was thinking of it when I heard Rattrap speak. "I can't believe she betraited us." I shot up. They must discoverd it that I was a couple with Megatron. Where was he? I need him more than ever. A tear was rolling on my cheek and it felt on the ground. It seems that Cheetor noticed this and walked beside me. "Why didn't you tell us?" he asked. Another tear was rolling as I spoke. "I thought you would never accept it. Megatron and I were so happy."

I told everthing about Megatron and I but stopped when a bright light was showing. Optimus walked into the light and got a reformation. Next were Cheetor, Rattrap and B.A. They looked awesome when they walked out. I wanted to walk to the light when Optimus stopped me. "You are no longer in this group, you are no Maximal from now on." and he walked away. I got banned? The light surrounded me as I was reformated. Instead of a Tyrannosaur I was now a dragon, a blue one. I looked one last time before flying away.

I found a perfect house to live in it. I was crying for three days now. I looked up when a sound was heard. "Don't move Maximal." A biker came out with guns. I lay back down. First I lost my love, than my group and now I am going to be killed. "Can I get your name before I die and one thing, don't call me a Maximal." The biker spoke. "Name's Thrust and why are you no Maximal?" "I am banned from making a huge mistake I don't want to talk about it." I lay back down. Thrust spoke something over his comm and ride to me. He picked me up by the arm and said "Come with me, ther is someone who wants to meet you." I walked with him, I didn't care any more, I just wanted to die. We went to the central of the city to meet.....
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blackwolf1890 [2013-09-06 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Please continue I really would like to know what happens lnext like will she meet the other generals or something ....... Please ? D':

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aya7wolves [2012-01-19 21:37:00 +0000 UTC]

i hope you put up the next part soon. i would like to see what the outcome of her meeting megatron again will be. please update soon.

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creeperlover In reply to aya7wolves [2012-01-19 22:12:37 +0000 UTC]

story has been cancled due lost of interest...and my grammar is alot better now tho xD

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aya7wolves In reply to creeperlover [2012-01-20 02:23:52 +0000 UTC]

aww i'm sorry to hear that. i was quite interested in knowing what was going to happen. but that's okay and that's good.

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LuanaRayART [2007-09-08 16:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Poor Sarah *hugs her* My old husband's been too harsh this time >.<

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creeperlover In reply to LuanaRayART [2007-09-08 18:45:36 +0000 UTC]

optimus banned her, guess to who Thrust is taking her?

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LuanaRayART In reply to creeperlover [2007-09-08 19:30:43 +0000 UTC]

er... Megatron?

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creeperlover In reply to LuanaRayART [2007-09-08 20:34:59 +0000 UTC]

*gives you a cookie*

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LuanaRayART In reply to creeperlover [2007-09-09 11:42:40 +0000 UTC]

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creeperlover In reply to LuanaRayART [2007-09-09 12:57:26 +0000 UTC]

WE HAVE A WINNER!!!

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LuanaRayART In reply to creeperlover [2007-09-09 14:16:50 +0000 UTC]

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creeperlover In reply to LuanaRayART [2007-09-09 15:31:30 +0000 UTC]

only bad things will happen when sarah arrives there.

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