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Description Nothing ever in literature can compare to the beauty of a sunrise.
                Perhaps nothing yet written could contrast
Nothing ever in this world could comprehend the wonder of changing seasons.
                Perhaps nothing in this world can yet understand
Nothing yet created can compare to the light from the stars themselves.
              Perhaps nothing yet created shines so bright

[Only one contrasting statement does it take to shatter the rule]

Nothing ever in literature could compare to the beauty of her smile
                Because nothing yet written has the power to depict…
Nothing ever in this world could comprehend the wonder of her changing expressions
                Because nothing in this world can yet move past the marvel it creates…
Nothing yet created can compare to light from her eyes
                  Because even the stars themselves can't shine as bright…
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Comments: 10

reachesforstars [2010-04-09 17:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Anastasha this is beautiful. Stunning. I'm not kidding, Gawsh I'm jealous of your talent at the moment.

I need to find time to read the rest of your stuff. But you need to promise me something right now, don't ever stop writing!!! The world would be very deprived if you ever did.

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CrikWing In reply to reachesforstars [2010-04-09 17:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks Alyssa. And don't worry, I won't ever stop. The world may not be deprived if I did, but I sure as hell would! =]

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reachesforstars In reply to CrikWing [2010-04-09 17:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. And the world might have been an exaggeration... but I would definitely be upset if that had happened. But I'm glad you like writing that much!~ ^^

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lilnutta10 [2010-04-07 20:56:34 +0000 UTC]

So wonderful
I hope they love it as much as i did reading it

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CrikWing In reply to lilnutta10 [2010-04-07 21:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much And she did =]

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lilnutta10 In reply to CrikWing [2010-04-07 21:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome
And im glad she did

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BlueIV [2010-04-07 18:51:13 +0000 UTC]

This is great, Tasha.

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CrikWing In reply to BlueIV [2010-04-07 20:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Cory =] Yea, I kind of had an affection seizure with this thing

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BlueIV In reply to CrikWing [2010-04-08 03:32:53 +0000 UTC]

I can tell. Haha! But the gooey-ness isn't too unbearable.

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CourtneyDax [2010-04-06 21:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Okay now I'm crying. You are an amazing and wonderful person and I am thanking all the Gods that I've met such a stunning soul. :')

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