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Published: 2023-11-07 03:32:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 899; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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"So, Max and I were hyped at the idea at starting a superhero team, well, Max does the superheroing while I am the tech and brains for his aid. But the moment Chiller decided to call out Max, I knew things were getting real serious knowing Chillers streak. But before we could even think of a plan, Max just bolted out ready to face Chiller. Unfortunetly he had forgotted his earpiece so I couldn't give him advice on what to do. Honestly I figured he may still give Chiller a run for his money after how awesome he was at taking down Blastream and Iron Spike, and after the training we did, I calculate Max was a real electric powerhouse. But I guess Chiller was much more tougher than he look, and by the looks of the battle I witnessed, after hacking in to security cams to get every angle, Max was lucky to get out of there with his life. If the U.R.F. didn't show up, Max would have indeed been killed, and luckily he got away from them to. After that Max disappeared, so I followed the spike in energy along the power lines to track him. Found him almost on the otherside of town. But Max wasn't in the best of shape. It seemed he got away with some cold injuries to his shoulders and cuts, but nothing serious. What I was worried about though was the mental state Max was it. Any other type of person would accuse him of being an immature crybaby, but I understand Max's state of mentality. The amnesia he experienced really did a number on him, his slow learning and maturing, his asphasia and dysphasia, but worse his sense of meaning. I know Max doesn't talk about it much but he has been feeling lost, it's like he feels he lost who he is because of his amnesia, and has had a hard time dealing with diffiulties and setbacks. This near death incident is obviously taking a toll on him, I can't help but also feel responsible for encouraging this hero gig. I just hope Max will be able to move on from this and not beat himself up over it." Lee Qin.Anyone can face a defeat, but some don't know how to handle them when not given the right prepartations for it, especially for one with a weak mind. The rush to be a hero was exciting but is a lot more dangerous than Max anticipated. Will this be a lesson learned, or will our hero throw in the towel this quickly.
Characters and story is owned, created, designed, and copyrighted by CrimzonNova510 aka David Braga
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