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Description Foreshortening is hard
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PERPU1 [2017-01-16 02:15:20 +0000 UTC]

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Welp it is kind of awkward to review stuff like this but ye..

The only thing I would say you should rework is the legs / ass part. As far as I understand you wanted to go for a stocking like look. I think legs are just too dark and lack shading / contrast. When you want to show certain details especially in the curvy areas shading makes a massive difference. These colours are just too similar and they do not expose what they should enough. (at least from my point of view). Just not enough details there.

Other than that, it looks really well done and I dig the rest of the colours.
Also I like how you drew her face.

Overall nicely done!

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Critnuke In reply to PERPU1 [2017-01-16 03:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique!

I can definitely agree with you on this, the shading was actually pretty clear originally, but the textures I added made it blend in with the color of her stockings way too much in the end. Also, looking at it now, the lineart color isn't doing it many favors either. I'll keep a closer eye on that stuff next time.

Thanks again, I appreciate it!

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PERPU1 In reply to Critnuke [2017-01-16 13:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Really no worries, glad I could help somehow!

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diegomolina [2017-01-16 04:48:12 +0000 UTC]

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