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Published: 2007-04-30 20:36:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1970; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description I'm Depressed.
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Rain sheeted down in the streets. There was no thunder or lightning, just hard pounding rain that shattered one's ears after being out in it for just a minute. It was a dark night, people couldn't even see if the street lights were lit or not if they stood right next to them. Rain blinded everything, and everyone was indoors.

Everyone, except for one.

A young, fifteen year old boy stood vigilant in front of a new grave that had been finished yesterday. No one had yet visited, and the grave was bare and plain, save for a simple design on the sides. The boy could not stop staring at the grave, clutching a bouquet of drowned flowers harder and harder as he thought more and more about the person that was now six feet under. The bouquet was carefully selected, making sure that there was at least one chrysanthemum in the bunch--her favorite flower. Tears began to roll down the boy's cheeks, mixed with the rain. He couldn't bear to let go of the bouquet, yet couldn't bear to leave without setting it down. It was the first full day after the grave was finished, yet no one had left an offering because of the vicious rain. Her family members had not come yet.

Except for one.
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*sigh*
Yes, another one in my notebook. You can see the lines.

Please full view. I am rather proud of this one.

An installment in the Reese saga thingummy. Yeah.

Before any lyoko fans run up and say 'OMG IT'S YUMI, ISN'T IT???? I KNEW IT LIEK OMG I KNEW IT WAS YUMI, PSYKE!!11!!!' I'm going to say it loud and clear.

THE GIRL THAT IS DEAD IS NOT YUMI.
NOT YUMI

OK??????????????
OK.

But as to who it is, I'll leave that a mystery for you guys to figure out.
Yes. It was someone he loved.
No. It's not an OC.

but the last few lines should be a dead giveaway anyways.
(oh, shit, bad pun)
(oh, shit, i swore. see? depressed. )

Ulrich (c) MoonScoop
Image and story plot (c) Tora

Do NOT steal.

ps. At the time I submitted this, it is my 74th deviation. heh. Lucky number. X9 how depressing this picture is. XD
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Comments: 79

WolfgirlXIII [2011-03-20 22:54:41 +0000 UTC]

So... damn... sad. ut it's so damn good! (I know who it is *sneaky smirk*)

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optimus304 [2008-02-06 05:00:56 +0000 UTC]

is it his mother?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to optimus304 [2008-02-06 21:26:20 +0000 UTC]

mmmyup. Sadly. Yup.

In the story, now that I have it up, it occurs in Chapter Ten, the "grave visit"

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optimus304 In reply to Crouching-Tora [2008-02-07 04:03:40 +0000 UTC]

sorry for being so late, i noticed it last night

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Crouching-Tora In reply to optimus304 [2008-02-07 21:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Pfft. Doesn't matter to me. I'm glad you like the picture though!

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Shizukesa-Shijima [2007-07-10 07:13:54 +0000 UTC]

is it a sister or a mother or a friend or some sort of family?(the person who is dead)

is the guy standing ulrich?

this pic is fantastica!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Shizukesa-Shijima [2007-07-23 17:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it is Ulrich.

Yes, you got it on the second guess.

Yes, it is sad.

Thank you very very much!!

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HopeDoodles [2007-05-02 03:36:19 +0000 UTC]

D:



I love the style you drew it in. Kinda like... a spy movie.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-02 20:22:55 +0000 UTC]

fwiend.

Or one of those dark comic formats. Yes, I had fun with my favorite pen, the one that inked this.

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 01:18:53 +0000 UTC]

I need a new pen. :0

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-03 01:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Never Fear! You're Friendly OfficeMax Peoples Are Here!!!

...and gone for lunch!

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 01:50:24 +0000 UTC]

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-03 12:51:34 +0000 UTC]

the time where I was when I typed that was...oh...8:56? Something like that.

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 13:23:39 +0000 UTC]

x3 That'd explain it...


I want Pie for breakfast. *has school in 10 minutes*

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-03 13:39:14 +0000 UTC]

tough. *has school now, but threw up right before had to leave*

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 22:20:24 +0000 UTC]

D: uuuugh, Im sorry! Is it just a flu?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-03 22:23:54 +0000 UTC]

i have no idea. *shrugs helplessly* And what are you sorry for?????

DID YOU FREAKIN INFECT ME??????

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 22:28:07 +0000 UTC]

>_> *walks away innocently*

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-03 22:30:39 +0000 UTC]

O_o

!!!!!!!!!!

*attempts to make chase but trips over cheeto and throws up cuz I just saw a picture of...of...FRESH CHEESE*

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 22:50:46 +0000 UTC]

D: NOT THE FRESH CHEESE!!!!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-04 00:17:29 +0000 UTC]

ababii bababiii aba That's all folks!!!! *falls from Empire State*

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-04 00:19:44 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-04 00:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Sure. Laugh as I die. Laugh haaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrd, because one day I'll come back to haunt you.

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-04 00:26:27 +0000 UTC]

MUWAWAWAWA!!!! *dies*

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2007-05-04 00:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Fine, I'll haunt you even if you did die!!!!!!!!!!!!

........

Whew, it's hot here. I thought heaven was in the clouds...?

o.o

oh crap--

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HopeDoodles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-04 13:13:08 +0000 UTC]

...OMG! x3

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resembles [2007-05-01 21:59:02 +0000 UTC]

some extra thoughts.
74 is such a random lucky number! [mines 27~]
and also! i was listening to this song and i soo thought of this deviation the other day.
maybe its kinda an obscure reference, but.. whatever!
if these lyrics take up too much space on this just feel free to hide the comment aha.

loose lips sink ships - hit the lights

this frame once held my favorite picture
but now it's empty, now it's broken
and that's how you left my chest
hallowed out by your hands
where you dug a grave and laid
your memory to rest

i hate the way you say i told you so
this is for all the wilted pedals on the floor
this is for a waste of a dozen roses maybe more

this should have ended with the kiss
that you left on someone else's lips
which turned my heart inside out
you left it looking much the same
a motionless mass of muscle and vain
as i clean up this mess you've made

so as i sing you to sleep
i hope my ghost haunts your dreams
lost in your memory
as bad as it seems

i hate the way you say i told you so
this is for all the wilted pedals on the floor
this is for a waste of a dozen roses maybe more
this is for how you deserved
nothing more from a rose than the thorns

so twist the knife
fashion me counter clockwise
turn back time
forget that you were never mine

so twist the knife (with this knife i will cut)
fashion me counter clockwise (the last piece of you from me)
turn back time (the razor blades will separate)
forget that you were never mine (any connections we've made)

but there's complications
in the operation
that keeps me from forgetting your face

turn back time (but come tomorrow i'll rid the sorrow)
forget that you were never mine (from within my heart which you plagued)

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Crouching-Tora In reply to resembles [2007-05-01 23:34:42 +0000 UTC]

XD I know it is. But it's my lucky number, and it's staying that way.

Nice song. I'm honored that you've thought of this in your daily life/whatever i should call it.

*gets hit*

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resembles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-02 00:12:42 +0000 UTC]

haha last night it came up on shuffle and i was listening to the lyrics and im like, "OMG~ bre picture!" -loser-
-doesn't hit you- 8D

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Crouching-Tora In reply to resembles [2007-05-02 00:17:41 +0000 UTC]

8D

you no loozerz!!!

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resembles In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-02 00:20:18 +0000 UTC]

lawl, thanks ;D

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Crouching-Tora In reply to resembles [2007-05-02 00:22:31 +0000 UTC]

np

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AndreaHarper [2007-04-30 23:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Don't be depressed. 'Drea thinks it's purtey. And my guess at the charater is that it's his sister/cousin/aunt/other female relative. Am I right? 'Drea thinks she's right.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to AndreaHarper [2007-05-01 00:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Well...try closer related than that. Sister was pretty close. Good guesses, though. you'll get it reaaaaaaaaaallly soon.

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AndreaHarper In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-01 23:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Uhh... Daughter! Neice! Uh... yeah. That's my round two of guesses.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to AndreaHarper [2007-05-01 23:31:05 +0000 UTC]

you haven't mentioned "Mother"

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AndreaHarper In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-02 04:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Actually, that was my next guess. *Sigh* Being a tree pirate should make this stuff eaiser, shouldn't it?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to AndreaHarper [2007-05-02 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]

D: *ish a tree hugger*

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AndreaHarper In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]

'Drea's a tree pirate. Which makes me specialful. Muahahahaha!!!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to AndreaHarper [2007-05-03 12:50:43 +0000 UTC]

D; MY PRECIOUS TREES!!!!!!!!! *hides*

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AndreaHarper In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 12:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Muahahahahaha.

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trinityvampire [2007-04-30 22:36:46 +0000 UTC]

that is sad oh so so sad

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Crouching-Tora In reply to trinityvampire [2007-04-30 23:07:50 +0000 UTC]

doohurg~

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trinityvampire In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-01 20:27:05 +0000 UTC]

doohurg?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to trinityvampire [2007-05-01 20:50:28 +0000 UTC]

exactly.

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trinityvampire In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-02 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]

ugggh leave it to a girl to confuse a guy

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Crouching-Tora In reply to trinityvampire [2007-05-02 23:45:27 +0000 UTC]

WAT WAS THAT????????????

SMEXIST!!!!!!!!!!!! *punch*

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trinityvampire In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 16:45:01 +0000 UTC]

i am not sexist if i was sexist i would say women were worthless
and im not saying that

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Crouching-Tora In reply to trinityvampire [2007-05-03 16:52:15 +0000 UTC]

*punch*

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trinityvampire In reply to Crouching-Tora [2007-05-03 19:00:08 +0000 UTC]

stop hitting me your worse than yakura

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