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Crouching-Tora — Tell me When

Published: 2009-02-03 01:48:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1094; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 4
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Description Raise your hands if...

You think the words on there come from an actual song.

You think this scene should happen with similar words being said between them.

You have a hard time reading Tora's handwriting regardless of the opacity.


The first one is a true/false situation, and as far as I know...those words are NOT song lyrics, I just came up with them on the spot. Should I write lyrics or something? I can't really come up with melodies. XD;;

"Lyrics" are:
Tell me when, then
Please tell me when it will be
When you finally realize
How much of you I despise
Tell me when!

Tell me when
You'll see all the hate in me
Is disguising my love for you


Drew this in my Crim Justice class (Criminal Justice)

Enjoy!
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Comments: 36

QuinSeparable [2009-02-03 13:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Aws I like it! You are a good lyricist y'know!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to QuinSeparable [2009-02-04 00:14:44 +0000 UTC]

...Man, I doubt I could make a decent living off of doing that though. XDDD (depends on how much I get paid and stuff...)


z

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co426e [2009-02-03 03:13:10 +0000 UTC]

If you need someone to make a melody for the lyrics, I'll do it. I play guitar! But I'm not that good...

Those lyrics really do fit them.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-03 03:16:30 +0000 UTC]

I play piano. XD But guitar would work better in my mind at least. I just play melodies, I don't make them up.


i kno rite. For both sides too~

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co426e In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-03 03:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Can you sing? Because I sure can't.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-03 03:36:20 +0000 UTC]

PFFFT. OF COURSE I can't.


barely sing.


if I could sing I'd be an alto though.

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co426e In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-03 04:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay, then who'd sing the lyrics for us?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-03 21:18:59 +0000 UTC]

My bffl is actually quite...proficient at singing, donchya know.

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co426e In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-03 22:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'll get to work on that melody and see how that goes.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-04 00:12:51 +0000 UTC]

XDDD


NOTE ME.

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co426e In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-04 00:21:48 +0000 UTC]

I'll do that when I'm done. Which will probably take a while...

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-04 00:22:55 +0000 UTC]





*stare*

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co426e In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-04 00:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Erm, (edges away) what's with the staring?

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Crouching-Tora In reply to co426e [2009-02-10 01:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I dunno. Just felt like being a creeper, that's all.



Nothing big.

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reese4me [2009-02-03 02:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I raise my hand to none of them!...even your handwriting which I seem to be able to read despite you saying that no one can. Picture's good to. I should comment more on the picture then on the artist comments.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to reese4me [2009-02-03 02:22:25 +0000 UTC]

You think this scene should happen with similar words being said between them.


Not even on that?
I'm shocked!

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reese4me In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-03 13:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Not even that!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to reese4me [2009-02-03 22:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Should I be worried?

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reese4me In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-04 00:00:03 +0000 UTC]

You should positively-negatively be!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to reese4me [2009-02-04 00:06:04 +0000 UTC]

8D................



whut.

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reese4me In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-04 01:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes. You should be confuzzzled.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to reese4me [2009-02-04 02:38:11 +0000 UTC]

I condemn you.


Sleep with the pigs!

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reese4me In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-04 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Sleep with the walruses!!!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to reese4me [2009-02-06 00:17:31 +0000 UTC]

fishes.


wait.

that's not ri--

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HopeDoodles [2009-02-03 02:06:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking up a tune for the words. <3



Love the colors.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to HopeDoodles [2009-02-03 02:11:26 +0000 UTC]

lol, to me it sounds like a Paramore-ish song, not particularly needed to be sung by Paramore, but just the style--to me, anyways.



Been fiddling around with Photoshop here n' there, mmmyup.

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Egg-Tea [2009-02-03 01:50:02 +0000 UTC]

love the emotions! are they original characters? it makes me feel so nostalgic ..

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Egg-Tea [2009-02-03 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]

That's the tricksy part. The origins of these characters do not belong to me, underneath these "new looks" are the characters Yumi and Ulrich from Code Lyoko, but in my fanfiction (yes I'm that dorky, a durr hurr HURR) I twist them up. Yumi's pretty much the same only a little shaken up A LOT after Ulrich left two years ago against everyone's will. When Ulrich returned from his abusive household with a gazillion scars he came under the alias "Reese Anders" to protect his friends from knowing who he is and ultimately his abusive father. (so basically, I twist them to my own liking and in a sense they DO become my characters)

Peh.

If you want to read it for kicks and giggles I'll send you a link. ~

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Egg-Tea In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-03 02:11:06 +0000 UTC]

omg! Code Lyoko..I watched that so long ago now! NOSTALGIA-WAVES-NOSTALGIA-WAVES
-has been knocked out-
and your comment made me laugh n_n
gosh..your what fifteen? (has checked your profile becos shes weird liek that)
geez.
this is what i was pretty much what i was doing at fifteen but with harry potter and pokemon.
u_u sendmelink! i will have no idea whats going on but its gunna be awesome!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Egg-Tea [2009-02-03 02:20:25 +0000 UTC]

XDDD;;; hurr.

I'm actually glad you checked that...I've been mistaken for a 18-20 year old even two years ago. (when I started writing this) Recently I had an incident where someone thought I was A LOT older and me, thinking that they knew I was 15, said an age-hypocritical statement that nearly offended them until I explained I was as old as them. OOPS. (I pretended to be an old lady complaining about THEM YOUNG'UN KIDS nowadays and talking about walking around in Victorian times or something...afeh)

Here ya go: [link]
(remember, I started writing this two years ago, not all of it is pure gold. XD) Also, the Chapter Directory in the artist comments only say up to chapter 20 when in reality there are 24 chapters submitted. *lazy*

Chapter 25 is being put on a sort of hold because of school and a need to write down all I want to say before I type it and wing it, which I've done before and forgotten little details. Chapter 25 is a chapter of DETAIL and will bury me, you, and everyone else in IMPORTANT PAST INFORMATION diarrhea up to their waists, so I'm waiting on that. XD;

--shutting up now.

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Egg-Tea In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-06 14:43:39 +0000 UTC]

oooer, sorry for the long wait for my reply! I was sick u_u
I will be reading yo story shortly tho, girl!

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Egg-Tea [2009-02-07 23:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it. XD feel better even if you already do.

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Egg-Tea In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-09 00:41:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
and I LOVE THAT SMILEY THING.
-steals laughing all the way-
HUHU


-has realized it does not copy paste-

AW SHIATSU MASSAGES.
¬_¬

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Egg-Tea [2009-02-09 01:10:43 +0000 UTC]




:icon deathstareplz: without the space.

doo et naow!

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Egg-Tea In reply to Crouching-Tora [2009-02-09 02:08:49 +0000 UTC]



OMGOMGOMGOMGOGMG.

:deathstareplz:

I LOVES IT.
Now I'm going to master this in the real-life! huhu!

darnit. Why can't I find such awesome nerds IRL? Why must they all be online.

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Crouching-Tora In reply to Egg-Tea [2009-02-09 02:28:57 +0000 UTC]

I have that exact same strife.


Thankfully for me there's Camp....but uh, that's a different matter.

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