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Published: 2008-11-12 23:58:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 455; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 17
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Spilled my coffee on my pantsBurns a bit, but I don't care
My mind's not here; I'm there with you
And I think I need you more than air-
Please excuse the dopey smile,
The rambling thoughts, the distant stare
But my mind, it seems, has slipped to dreams
As I breathe you in like air-
Someone speaks to me, but I don't reply,
Don't get me wrong; it's not that I don't care
It's just mind is hard to find
As I breathe you in like air
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Comments: 7
Oh my gosh!
Please share with your dear niece the secret of rhyming!
For you can pull it off without sounding childish/silleh.
I am shamed, for I am a silly child.
THUMBS UP, UNCLE! I like this one the best. And it's true, love is very much like this. 
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awwww. why are not all men as romantic as you, even if it's cheesy? ._. i ended up with the guy with the obsession with Bekinsdale and not an ounce of romance in him..sigh.
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Now Jael, I wrote this one for Kate, I'll have you know!
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Liar. Liar pants on fire. ;_; even so...Why can't people just write it for the normal girls and not the fakes? DDDD: *sad for not having a romantic fiance.*
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Beautiful work... God, I need to fall in love again sometime soon...
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Very nice... only, shouldn't it be:
My mind's not there; I'm here with you
?
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