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YouAnd the word haunts me
Like a whisper in a crowded room
My eyes glide through the faces of strangers
Seeking only
You
Are beside me in the dark
Breathing life into the dark
Giving meaning to this world within my arms
Where I only want to hold
You
Have my heart within your hands
My soul within your eyes
My life within your veins
The answer to it all is
You
Are the dream, and
You
Are what is real, and
You
Are what I need,
All I want,
My indefinable and perfect
You
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Comments: 6
The first three lines are captivating because they are so visual and emotional. I like these lines too:
Have my heart within your hands
My soul within your eyes
My life within your veins
Some of it is a bit cliche, but that's the way romance and love goes.
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Thank you!
Y'know, I was thinking how to respond to the cliche comment, 'cause it is a bit, but it seems to me that the problem with romance poetry in general is that it's been so done to death that there's no way around the cliche.
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What happened to embittered old man? This is so jolting.
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I can barely buy my own smokes. Anyone who can buy me beer is officially elderly.
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