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CrumbledWings — One Day At A Time

Published: 2013-10-20 21:43:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 3188; Favourites: 265; Downloads: 18
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Description The cover image was done by ~estellamestella Whew guys i am finally back and plus school work has been a killer this month. First poem in a while, and if your wondering where the idea came from watch Halle Berry's "Things We Lost In The Fire" . Benicio is completely amazing. This poem is centered around drug usage ,and i made it purposefully vague so i could apply to a myriad of things. Hope everyone enjoys
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ArtisticJellyfish [2018-09-02 22:50:44 +0000 UTC]

I love your poetry so much, in that it puts such complex feelings into words with such talent that it provokes such feeling in the reader. That is very powerful, and shows that you have a lot of talent.

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FlipswitchMANDERING [2013-10-21 09:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Such truth

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greystarlight [2013-10-21 00:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done.  I can feel the despair.  

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aWay-with-knives In reply to greystarlight [2013-10-21 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=_CFeEm…

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SavXArts [2013-10-20 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]

love the concept

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aWay-with-knives In reply to SavXArts [2013-10-21 04:12:25 +0000 UTC]

actually, I take that bad. they all look plastic. it's the premise, I was entertained by

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aWay-with-knives In reply to SavXArts [2013-10-21 04:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I don't think hooters is somewhere I'll ever be going, but I just gotta say - this is soooooo awesome hahaha

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SavXArts In reply to aWay-with-knives [2013-10-25 21:40:22 +0000 UTC]

I am so lost ._. 
what?

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aWay-with-knives In reply to SavXArts [2013-10-26 11:13:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm disgusted by how it's something I artistically-see as being a parody of its' corny self, and the fact that someone thought this was advertising. I don't think those women are even fuckable, they look artificial. like I'd get nasty tasting grease on my face if I kissed one. but they're being marketed as mascots for a greasy take on swiss chalet, just the same. could you imagine a guy ever saying to his significant other, "baby you know I love you and all, let's go to hooters and get some wings!!"

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SavXArts In reply to aWay-with-knives [2013-10-26 16:47:17 +0000 UTC]

No I mean why are you randomly talking about your disgusted feelings for Hooters under a poems about a continues lie that taking things 'one day at time' will bring change? 

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aWay-with-knives In reply to SavXArts [2013-10-26 17:10:57 +0000 UTC]

the continuous lie that "one day at a time" ever brings anything more than more-affective advertising

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SavXArts In reply to aWay-with-knives [2013-10-26 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Lol I see, and their laying off of sex appeal  

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