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crumblygumbly — boy named sue second draft

Published: 2009-02-16 11:33:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5346; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 46
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Description Fixed up the first part of it--focused in a bit more on the first panel, added a crowd, and made the bully look less than quasimodo's skinny cousin.

Second panel is the same tho. *laughs* Should probably add a reaction shot from the crowd or something.

whoo. *laughs*

Boy named Sue written by Shel Silverstein
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Comments: 26

Dragon-Art14 [2012-12-06 00:22:54 +0000 UTC]

LOL XD

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KougaWuvs [2010-11-03 19:25:24 +0000 UTC]

I love your talent, I want to make babies with you!

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BenSane83 [2009-09-20 01:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Johnny Cash!!!!AHHHH! I LOVE THIS!

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Taba-X-Kuku [2009-05-29 12:14:01 +0000 UTC]

"Some gal'd giggle and I'd get red and some guy'd laugh and I'd bust his head!"

Life ain't easy for a boy named Sue. :'>

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andre-o [2009-05-18 08:48:32 +0000 UTC]

absolutly lovin it, but i have to say the bully looks in pain more than he's laughing

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XxDreamsToRealityxX [2009-04-05 04:45:53 +0000 UTC]

I remember that song!

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LilDevilishBrat [2009-03-09 00:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Johnny Cash sings a version of A Boy Named Sue. Freakin awesome.
Love the picture ^^

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LizzyZuko [2009-02-23 16:46:34 +0000 UTC]

This is very funny! Although the bully looks like he's in pain to me :S It's probably just me though, but i love the second panel! :+FAV:

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admiral-norrington [2009-02-19 01:59:13 +0000 UTC]

ahh when you add shading and dimension to your pictures sooo gooooodddddddd *ssskkeeettccchhhh*

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TheOnlyWarman [2009-02-18 12:12:41 +0000 UTC]

interesting, the only other boy named sue was mandark but he was named susan

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Weird-Oddball-Girl [2009-02-18 03:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice second draft, I like Sue's facial expression in the first panel better now. I don't know how you could've made the second panel any better, though the crowd reaction shot sounds a good idea to me.

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ludovica64 [2009-02-17 13:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Weird coincidence

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ludovica64 [2009-02-17 12:55:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it G. I say again though.. is this for a certain event in August or not?

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crumblygumbly In reply to ludovica64 [2009-02-17 12:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it was for illustration class. *laughs*

But it totally could be!!

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Swishyfish2003 [2009-02-17 05:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love this song, but I totally didn't know it was written by Shel Silverstein! I had always assumed Cash had written it up himself. That's awesome though, 'cause I love both Johnny Cash, AND Shel Silverstein

Yah learn somethin' new every day if your not careful :3

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dragonsinger13 [2009-02-16 20:36:53 +0000 UTC]

I like what you did! It adds a lot more to what is going on!

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alexismyname [2009-02-16 19:50:09 +0000 UTC]

didn't you get this concept from dexter's lab?

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crumblygumbly In reply to alexismyname [2009-02-16 20:04:23 +0000 UTC]

No? Dexter's lab got that concept from a song written by Shel Silverstein and performed by Johnny Cash. The title of the Mandark episode was even named "A boy named Susan." it's a reference, honey--this one came out in 1969.

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alexismyname In reply to crumblygumbly [2009-02-16 20:05:24 +0000 UTC]

oh i see

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TheCheatIsNotDead [2009-02-16 18:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice, I like the personality a lot. A solid improvement I think.

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roolsilver [2009-02-16 17:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Mwahahahaha! Sorry, just felt that an evil cackle was appropriate. Love it. props on the shirt, it looks good. Is the tall guy's hair darker in the second panel?

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the-wee-me [2009-02-16 17:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I kinda miss his little boots in the first panel. But the crowd makes it even better and I like the shading.

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Mokuu [2009-02-16 16:57:25 +0000 UTC]

He went Ryu on them : )

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riazzz [2009-02-16 16:23:27 +0000 UTC]

very cool, the expressions and perspectives are great!

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lightangel25 [2009-02-16 13:44:13 +0000 UTC]

ok he kinda looks like the joker from the dark knight......

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HPhantasia [2009-02-16 12:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Now that you mention it... he DID look like Quasi's cousin. LMAO

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