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Published: 2015-04-23 06:45:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2149; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 21
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Been trying to improve my drawing speed lately, so I tried doing a similar drawing to the Fluttershy Β one I did recently (but in about half the time, about 5.5 hours for this).Still, I had a blast with this. Sunset is still my favourite character, and that ain't changing anytime soon.
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I really love this character. She's my favorite.
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You and me both!
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Absolutely magnificent. But I do have a couple nit picks.. if you don't mind me sharing that is.
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I'm always open to some constructive criticism. Shoot!
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Ok.. well fist of all you hit all the major features very well, the hair, eyes, clothing choice, clothing shading, etc. But some small features seem a little buggy. Her mouth, nose, and ear seem too light to be noticed at first glance which gives a faceless girl except for eyes. Her right arm seems to be swallowed by her hair, not coming out the other side of her body. I know the way she is posed would make it so you wouldn't see much of her arm anyway but, it seems out of place with such a slender character if none of her arm is there. A few fingers on the opposite arm as if she were holding her arms behind her back would help. Her mid waist seems to be a bit longer in proportion to the rest of her body but that's mostly artist's interpretation in how they draw a character, so meh. Her right eyebrow bugs me because it looks good but, it aappears over the hair diddle (I don't know what thats called.) That's about it, I think.
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This is some good feedback, and I really appreciate it. Β
I tried doing a few things differently than what I'd usually go with, just to see how they'd turn out. The eyebrow being over the hair was intentional, as I thought the hair would cover too much of it and it would looking like she has no eyebrows at all. Honestly, I did try to get the hand on her opposite arm holding her left arm, but after multiple iterations I was just not content with how it turned out, so I regretfully chose to opt out of including that in. I definitely agree that her facial features are much lighter than I'd like them to be, so I'll probably go back and tweak it for the purpose of using it elsewhere.
Thanks again, I'm always glad to read what people have to say about what I make.
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You're very welcome ^Ο^
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