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The Howl The NightDid Not Oppose
By Justin Borer
In the forest on this cold, misty, moonlit night.
Nature is calm and quiet with not a soul in sight.
The silence continues, nothing trying to fight.
Then moonlight shines through the trees.
The light continues to flow like a calm breeze.
Casting shadows upon the lonly leaves.
A branch snaps breaking the somber silence.
Something in the darkness moves showing its defiance.
The forest shifts reluctantly to this act of violence.
Through the shadow the moon helps soothe.
This figure has nothing to prove.
Steathy and strong it continued to move.
The figure emerged from the darkness to cast its own shadow.
Through its grey and black fur the wind does blow.
With its pointed ears every creature it does know.
The creature sat on the ground and looked at the starry sky.
He felt alone, that, no one could deny.
through its bluish-gray eyes it wondered why.
He looked up at the bright full moon.
He let out a howl and held its desperate tune.
Hoping someone would respond very soon.
No one replied to his desperate call.
His heart still felt so small.
He wondered why he even tried at all.
His ears dropped and he turned to walk away.
He wanted to go but he also wanted to stay.
Then another tune broke the silence coming his way.
A howl came from off in the distance.
It rang through the night with little resistence.
The call was one of love and persistance.
He then realized something he didnβt from the start
There was someone out there looking for his heart.
Once they would meet they would never part.
Then the creature replied and he arose.
Following the feeling he truly knows.
Toward the one the night did not oppose.
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Comments: 62
SpiritFlareWolf In reply to ??? [2006-01-21 06:06:01 +0000 UTC]
That's the spirit! I'm sure you'll find someone who awakens your powerful emotions soon
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Crusher0508 In reply to SpiritFlareWolf [2006-01-21 19:47:56 +0000 UTC]
that is my hope I truly need to get back in the romantic nautre again if only I had ideas that coudl spark my train of thought XD
I've recently written lines and groups of lines but my mind can't seem to fuse them or expand on them
here are some of them
The end is coming, a time so dear
I ask that you please donβt shed a tear
I will live on within you so do not fear
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Should I stay or should I go
casting myself intho shadows once more
no one shall ever know
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To hold you in my arms would be such a wonderful dream
but in reality itβs not what it would seem
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then I am a longer oen but I will send you that noather tiem if you want
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SpiritFlareWolf In reply to Crusher0508 [2006-01-22 02:36:17 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to see your longer one, and I get that way too. Not able to get a full poem, just some lines, there's two like that in my scraps. My thing is, is that I don't like poems that are less than five lines, it bothers me to look at my poems that are short, don't know why it just does.
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Crusher0508 In reply to SpiritFlareWolf [2006-01-22 02:42:38 +0000 UTC]
well than herer it is
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What do you desire
What is it that fuels your fire
Do you want me vanish
for my presence brings tears
Do you want me to fade away
and cast away your fears
Do you want me to wrap my arms around you
for in my arms you find comfort
Do you want me to take you away form here
so we can both shoulder the hurt
Do you want to know what is within my heart
who has had it from the start
anything that you ask of me
I shall do
because I love you
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yeah I agree with you it does get kidna agrevating but I also don;t liek a poem that lags on either XD I am picky
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SpiritFlareWolf In reply to Crusher0508 [2006-01-22 02:54:48 +0000 UTC]
sweet, why don't you post that poem?
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I don't like poems that lag on either, we sure are picky poets aren't we?
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SpiritFlareWolf In reply to SpiritFlareWolf [2006-01-22 21:50:56 +0000 UTC]
If this posts I'm mad. Why? Because this is like the third time I tried to respond to your comment I understand why you don't want to post your poem and I feel the same way about some of my poems. They just don't seem "quite finished" so I don't show them to anyone.
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Crusher0508 In reply to SpiritFlareWolf [2006-01-22 04:49:58 +0000 UTC]
that we are that we are
and the reason why I don't post ist is becuase I feel there is more that can be compsed into that poem than there already is. it longs for more passion and more meanign and detail that I must include in it
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Yellowwolf [2004-11-10 03:34:47 +0000 UTC]
O wow. Awesome poem. I really lurve it! That is some kickass rhyming and writing skilz! ^_^
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erika18 [2004-11-09 00:55:13 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. ^__________^ Actually, you're my favorite poet.
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Weatherstorm [2004-11-08 10:14:47 +0000 UTC]
Hmm this poem sounds very familiar to me... and will most likely bare a striking resemblance to another person as well. You know who you are
Anyways, great poem you are getting a wonderful way with words that makes it flow so smoothly. Quite the poet you are!
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nnovgorod4l [2004-11-06 18:39:00 +0000 UTC]
This is very very nice, great rhymes too nice job!
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