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Luna, our Mother,We raise our voices to her;
The Full Moon smiles.
Running beneath her,
Not once do we go awry
With her guiding help.
Luminous delight
Never fails to bring sweet change
From twilight to Night.
Her glee at making
Us, eternal servants, hunt;
She sees everything.
But we cannot stop
Time from passing, itβs just life.
Light is hesitant--
But only at first.
Before we know it, the sun
Has taken back rule.
His rule of the sky,
Just as Lunaβs, is never
Lasting, a promise.
A commitment to
All to return, as Night falls;
Eager, we await it.
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Comments: 19
SHADOWWOLF293 [2014-04-05 07:40:49 +0000 UTC]
That's a great poem and wolves r AWESOME!!!!!!!
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Diamond1997 [2013-11-08 12:59:24 +0000 UTC]
I love wolves and poetry.... nicely written!!!
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urgirl4ever [2012-05-01 04:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Wolves are so amazing... such beauty and grace should never be tamed! They remind me of myself except instead of 'beautiful and graceful' its more 'wild and misunderstood'. Awesome poem!
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urgirl4ever In reply to waterbender-1-8-9 [2012-06-12 19:03:29 +0000 UTC]
Ur welcomeWolves r awesome
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TropicalFreckles [2008-05-19 09:47:57 +0000 UTC]
Hmph. I defitnetly know you don't want me talking to you probably, but I decided to read one of your things, since you are a writer. I actually think this is pretty good--I always loved wolves, one of my favorite animals because I thought they were beautiful, yet fierce creatures. You captured your words very well in this.
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waterbender-1-8-9 In reply to TropicalFreckles [2008-05-20 00:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the compliments! I love getting them, and people describing what they liked about it.
Also, I don't mind anyone talking to me, for reasons I mentioned in our last conversation. Actually, I don't get too many comments on my work, so I appreciate it.
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TropicalFreckles In reply to waterbender-1-8-9 [2008-05-20 00:30:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I posted that yesterday. Or this morning... I can't remember. My memory is horrible... XD Anyways, yes, I know that feeling. Only a few people post on my works, but I don't mind so much. Which reminds me, I need to try and get back into posting on the artists I watch, artworks. XD Gah, I've been busy.
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waterbender-1-8-9 In reply to TropicalFreckles [2008-05-20 01:12:17 +0000 UTC]
I'm about to post a story I've been working on for a couple months (*spoiler, don't tell anyone* ), called Angel, chapter 1, and I think it's going great so far.
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TropicalFreckles In reply to waterbender-1-8-9 [2008-05-20 09:58:41 +0000 UTC]
I'll read it. :3
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waterbender-1-8-9 In reply to TropicalFreckles [2008-05-21 00:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. :3 So...tell me what you think of it, but I'd prefer you did that on the deviation itself...
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TropicalFreckles In reply to waterbender-1-8-9 [2008-05-21 09:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. XD
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waterbender-1-8-9 In reply to YourClosetNinja [2008-05-09 03:49:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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