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Published: 2014-06-28 22:25:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 3612; Favourites: 184; Downloads: 0
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First page of a two page comic I had to do a month ago for the comic course I just finished, featuring my oc Cheryl, though not all of what's shown here is considered canon for her storyI had lots of fun working on it and got much experience but it was hard doing it solely in traditional as I don't practice traditional inking at all LOL I wish I had started earlier and had more time to work on this but oh well this is the result and I'm pretty much satisfied of the first page more then the second
there isn't much story/plot because I did this purely to show what I know to draw and not to show off my nonexistent narrative skills LOL but I hope it's still enjoyable 
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Comments: 35
Eeeeh ma sei italiana?!? Quando ti ho watchato non me ne ero accorta... beh, buono a sapersi, grazie ad Artisti nottambuli ora lo so!
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ma tipo che questo commento non l'ho mai visto...? mi dispiace D:
cmq ti ringrazio tanto per i complimenti!
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Ahah, di niente, figurati!!
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what a wonderful comic page...its rewarding to read and flows through the pictures very well! excellent stuff
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it is a beautifully composed and executed comic page I enjoy it very much
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This is really good! You should do more comic pages!!
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I will if I'll have some cool stories in mind
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Thatd be awesome. I really like you comic style
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I love it, but i have a few critisim/suggestion (they so small, that maybe nobody see them.... accept you look it fourthtimes like me^^)
i miss a bit of speedlines in the last big panel on the rabbit and the fox. they don#t seem to move at all! (if you know that i mean???^^ baaaad english)
and one more "critical" point. in the first row the right panel: It doesn#t be clear, why she looks in the upper left corner? is there a person standing behind her? (and the move that she taking an arrow is going under a bit)
And now:
I simply love your traditional work, the whole pages is wonderful balanced in the composing and the black and white areas! (my favourite is the last little panel, where she and the fox are white and the bg black!)
and also i like the rough lines around the panels!
I wish my traditional inking would be so clear as yours!
great done!
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thank you for taking you time to write this out!
oh yeah I totally could have added some lines there, I'll probably do in digital, thank you for suggesting!
she was supposed to be look at her arrows, so I corrected that too
thats my favourite too haha and thank you so much! I'm sure you'll get better with lots of practice too
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okay i will try
hope we see more from your comicpages!
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Very nice clean lines. On a print, it will be easy to handle and read.
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I spot a little grammar mistake in the last sentence. It's "How could I have missed that?". But besides that the page is well done^^ congrats
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thank you! I'll correct that soon
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no problem ure more than welcome^^
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You have a knack for manga!
Are you going to be doing more of these?
They are pretty time consuming though.
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thank you! not sure but not for now, I don't have any in mind.
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davvero complimenti crys!! non vedo l'ora di leggere quella dopo
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grazie mille XD la posterò appena finisco di sistemare qualche cosuccia qua e là che ancora non mi convince
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Nice! Typo: How could I have missed that?!
I think it looks nice without tones, too. Just good ol' black and white ink work.
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oh thank you I'll correct that!
and yeah as it was in traditional I had no way to put tones unless I wanted to spend a lot of money or/time so yeah xD but the whole black and white balancing experience has helped me a lot in growth too
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this is really good!! hope to see more comics from you
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ahh thank you so much ;v; you've been a constant reference while I was working on this, so thank you for being awesome too
I just have to plan a good story and I hope to start something soonish, will see *-*
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wow this is awesome 
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ohh you'll see what happens u-u
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Such beautiful inking and character drawing on this page! I love doing comics, and I can see your passion in your work too.
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