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Was choose by teachers to go to a watercolor seminar. They teach ppl how to paint with watercolor as quickly as possible. Great skill to have during my later art examsRelated content
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Hi, I'm here for projectcomment to critique you artwork. These are all just suggestions 
First of all, I must say this is overall, very good. You did an awesome job ion the grass, making it somehow both artistic and realistic. Also, I really love the shading on the barn it makes it look very, for lack of a better word, cool. But, I don't really, in my opinion, like the white stripes on the palms. I feel like it would look better if they were less opaque and were vertical, like real palm trees. Also, I'm not really a fan of all the white-space on the ground. I think it would look better if there were a transparent chestnut color instead. Also, I would consider adding sand, as it looks like it is near the beach. But the background vegetation or jungle looks very good. Also, I forgot to mention, the crosshatch lines on the house's roof looks good. I think the sky is a bit too dark though, I think it would look better if it were light blue. Finaly, I would prefer the clouds either to be brighter, or for there to be none.
Thats it for now. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for your suggestions! I will take them to improve in later paintings ( ^v^)/
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Oh wow this is gorgeous! The colours are really lovely, beautiful work!
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You're very welcome!
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i honestly dont think so but thanks!
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This is so cute and beautiful. I love the bright colors and shadows on the sand.
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You're very welcome!
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up the Awesome Work!No Problem. Keep up the Awesome Work!
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