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"Cinderpelt...?"


"Yes, Fireheart?"


"I have to tell you something... I-I-"


"Cinderpelt!"


"Huh... Fireheart...?" Cinderpelt shook her head groggily as she was roused from her sweet dream. The gray she-cat lifted her head up and blinked her eyes slowly. The image in front of her sharpened, but she already know who it was.


"S-s-sandstorm! What are you doing here?"


"I'll tell you what I'm doing here." Sandstorm snarled, unsheathing her claws. "Fireheart is mine you hear me? Mess with him again and I'll bet Yellowfang will have something interesting to hear..."


Cinderpelt's heart was hammering. "I-I don't know what y-you mean..."


"LIAR!" Sandstorm screeched as she brushed her needle-sharp claws against dark gray fur. As the room started fading to darkness, Cinderpelt could sense the sand-coloured pelt exiting the room, unmistakable smugness shooting out like arrows.


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"Cinderpelt! Who in the world did this to do?" Yellowfang mewed, her voice rusty with age.


"It's... It's nothing, Yellowfang. Don't worry about me. I...I...I was collecting herbs and a... branch scratched me."


"Then why didn't you apply any dock or marigold? What if it gets infected? Here, let me help."


Just then, the over-familiar scent hit Cinderpelt heartbeats before the unmistakable ginger-coloured tom entered the medicine cat den. Cinderpelt could feel blush creeping up her back. She started licking her paws self-consiously as Fireheart padded nearer.


"Cinderpelt! What happened?!" Fireheart asked, his eyes huge. "Does it hurt?"


Thankfully, Yellowfang returned with her stock of dock and marigold. Yellowfang answered for Cinderpelt before the younger she-cat could make a mistake. "She claims that she was scratched by a branch. Mouse dung! From the looks of it, it's definitely a wound caused by a cat. You didn't enter another Clan's territory, did you?"


"N-no! Of course not!"


"Hmph! If you're going to become a medicine cat you're going to have to stop acting like a kit!" Turning to face Fireheart, Yellowfang gave a rusty purr. "She's grown up, yet she's making me worry even more."


"Don't worry, Yellowfang. You've already got me." Fireheart replied cheekily.


Yellowfang battered Fireheart gently. "Hmph! You all are driving me to an early place in StarClan!" she scolded jokingly.


Fireheart purred in response before looking back at Cinderpelt. "Are you sure you're okay? Remember to tell me if you're feeling unwell." Fireheart gave a quick lick before padding out of the den.


Cinderpelt could feel her cheeks reddening. But then she looked up to see Sandstorm quietly sharpening her claws, giving Cinderpelt an unmistakable death stare.

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Comments: 53

LoveSong83 [2014-03-09 04:15:19 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! I FREAKIN HATE SANDSTORM'S GUTS!!! I WANNA KILL HER MY SELF!!!!!      

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leiki224 In reply to LoveSong83 [2017-04-16 22:45:13 +0000 UTC]

i actuallly  like sandstorm

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digidigi345 In reply to LoveSong83 [2015-11-22 18:15:25 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY, SOMEBODY UNDERSTANDS ME!!!!!!!

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Ask-Warri0r-Cats In reply to digidigi345 [2015-12-24 03:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Yesh! Team murder Sandstorm!

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digidigi345 In reply to Ask-Warri0r-Cats [2015-12-25 22:46:21 +0000 UTC]

                                
       !!!

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Ask-Warri0r-Cats In reply to digidigi345 [2015-12-25 23:21:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!!!!!!

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Phoenix-10-16 [2012-12-21 14:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh DANG, CAT FIGHT!

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scooberk [2012-09-11 22:59:29 +0000 UTC]

you should finish it would be awesome

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Jayfeather20002 [2012-01-31 00:53:14 +0000 UTC]

r u going to finish it?

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bunnypop224 [2012-01-25 22:38:12 +0000 UTC]

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sorralwing [2011-12-23 01:42:28 +0000 UTC]

its really good!

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Beckypaw [2011-08-20 08:01:30 +0000 UTC]

I can't see anything! Y can'y I see anything?!

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cassie203 [2011-07-17 00:37:52 +0000 UTC]

sandstorm is my fav warriors cat in the whole series warriors new prophecy power of 3 and omen ofthe stars
this is the best writing peice i read on this website
i know u said dont bug me but its soooooo gooooood i have to
plz finish it
my fav

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leiki224 In reply to cassie203 [2017-04-16 22:47:21 +0000 UTC]

finaly someone understands me!    

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ReminiscenceSaga [2011-06-11 02:59:44 +0000 UTC]

All the more reason to hate Sandstorm.

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bluemoon11ful [2011-06-01 18:30:39 +0000 UTC]

kool.......!

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Snowstorm42 [2011-01-20 01:40:45 +0000 UTC]

kool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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midnightthefox [2011-01-12 03:52:38 +0000 UTC]

very good

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Swordexpert-Stock [2010-10-18 01:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely written however noticed small spelling/grammar error

"Huh... Fireheart...?" Cinderpelt shook her head groggily as she was roused from her sweet dream. The gray she-cat lifted her head up and blinked her eyes slowly. The image in front of her sharpened, but she already know who it was.

Should be knew

Nice work dear

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Otaku-Master101 [2010-10-09 17:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I <3 it!!!

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sasukefairy [2010-09-23 21:03:50 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!!!

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Oshike [2009-12-22 20:25:47 +0000 UTC]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Ppp-pokerface [2009-07-01 01:57:49 +0000 UTC]

ha ha I dont like Sandstorm much. She always has issues:

'Oh, no! The guy I love is in love with a dead cat but I lllluuuuvv him anyway and I hate that dead cat because she sees him in his dreams, I wanna see him in his dreams, I bet he doesn't dream about me, and I will hate him if i don't get a apprentice and will ignore him for months on end, then I'll get mad because he's ignoring me, why does he love a dead cat, I'm so better...OH NO! FIREHEART TALKED TO A GIRL! I must exterminate her....'


Yeah, I know this is a long comment...no one hate me for typing what I feel...

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BlossomPanda In reply to Ppp-pokerface [2016-03-19 03:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Exactly,I don't understand why everybody likes her.For me she was just an inmature,possesive,rude,spoiled mousebrain.SPOILER FOR THE APPRENTICES'S QUEST DON'T TELL ME I DIDN'T WARN YOU  I was glad when she died.

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sasukefairy In reply to Ppp-pokerface [2010-09-23 21:01:30 +0000 UTC]

*slaps sandstorm then turns to !Ppp-pokerface* i agree with your rambaling!

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loverofviera [2009-05-12 05:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Sandstorm can cut off here tail and jump off a cliff.

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Beckypaw In reply to loverofviera [2011-08-20 08:03:31 +0000 UTC]

Sandstorm is one of my fav warriors! How can u be so mean!?

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X-SavannahPalomino-X [2009-01-21 16:49:13 +0000 UTC]

MY Opinions:

FIRExSAND = AWESOMNESS!
FIRExSPOTTED = CUTE but ..... SpottedLeaf was a medicine cat!
FIRExCINDER - IMPOSSIBLE! (Cinderpelt is a medicine cat AND WAY younger than Fireheart/Firestar)

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Ask-Warri0r-Cats In reply to X-SavannahPalomino-X [2015-12-24 03:45:55 +0000 UTC]

acctualy, she is only about a year younger than him.

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Asycath [2008-12-02 16:38:59 +0000 UTC]

CINDERXFIRE!!!!!!! Woot. Yes, Cinder x Fire forever

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marilee90 [2008-10-16 22:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Personally I don't ship CinderxFire. (I'm currently with Snadstorm and Firestar, sorry.) But this was cute. If you do finish this I will keep reading it; Your a very talented fanfiction writer.

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Nightpaw101 [2008-09-12 04:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Did this really happen? O_O I hope not.

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Rushingwater19 [2008-08-12 00:37:17 +0000 UTC]

i like sandy she kick butt! you no good! you make her evil!(though cinder also kick butt, sandy and fire belong together)

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YetAnotherMember [2008-07-31 02:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Boo! Sandstorm and Firestar belong together! Spottedleaf and Firestar could never have a future because Spottedleaf was a medicine cat! Same for Cinderpelt!

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sasukefairy In reply to YetAnotherMember [2010-09-23 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

hey just cuz there a medicine cat dont mean they cant secretly have some fun
*coughs and looks toward some medicine cats she knows the futures of*
didnt want any spoilers in my comment

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Ask-Warri0r-Cats In reply to sasukefairy [2015-12-24 03:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol I agree with you, I love Cinderxfire

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Ncpokeham [2008-07-07 01:32:53 +0000 UTC]

SpottedxFire supporter...yay!I doubt the Sandstorm would hurt Cinderpelt but she would be VERY protective.XD I also think CinderxFire is cute.Nice story,great writing.

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Bluefire111 [2008-07-03 04:49:34 +0000 UTC]

I never thought about Sandstorm hurting Cinderpelt before. Wonder why no-one ever thought about it.

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ImNotCrazyJustWeird [2008-06-29 23:38:26 +0000 UTC]

nyah! awesome! i dispise sandstormxfirestar.
TT.TT why did spottedleaf have to die? anyways
great begining can't wait for the next piece.

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Ask-Warri0r-Cats In reply to ImNotCrazyJustWeird [2015-12-24 03:47:55 +0000 UTC]

I hate Sandstorm lol

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ClearBlueSkys [2008-06-19 17:30:32 +0000 UTC]

cool story. i dont think Sandstorm, who is always following the warrior code would ever hurt Cinderpelt of all cats, but...

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FlameheartFirepelt [2008-06-19 08:43:22 +0000 UTC]

I have always wish Cinderpaw and Fireheart had gotten together, I strongly despise SandxFire parings...~Shivers run down her spine~ Sometimes I swear to myself that she worked with ShadowClan so that Spottedleaf would die and her and Fireheart could get together....~Glint comes into her brown eyes~ But hey, that's just me!

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AylaHyuga [2008-06-08 02:23:56 +0000 UTC]

I hate this. You make Sandstorm seem like a, wel a very bad cat! Dx
SandxFire foreveh

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X-SavannahPalomino-X In reply to AylaHyuga [2009-01-21 16:46:45 +0000 UTC]

TOTALLY!

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crazyrab In reply to AylaHyuga [2008-12-05 07:03:18 +0000 UTC]

I agree!

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Icepaw92 In reply to crazyrab [2009-06-18 02:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Me too sorry but i think that cind and fire are more like bro and sis. Sorry

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Nightpaw101 In reply to AylaHyuga [2008-09-12 04:13:09 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree. I really like SandxFire.

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Lynxstripe [2008-06-03 15:05:46 +0000 UTC]

COOL! Can't wait til' its finiished

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HGNDS [2008-06-03 11:16:31 +0000 UTC]

NUUUH CLIFFHANGERS. *.* Can't wait to see the end of this! Heh, evil Sandstorm. >< I'm a SpottedxFire fan myself, but I find CinderxFire just as cute... and I despise SandxFire. >:

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crystalfoot In reply to HGNDS [2008-06-04 05:07:00 +0000 UTC]

i are evil >
*kills Sandstorm*
me -->

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