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Published: 2005-02-07 23:09:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 16
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Card Captor Sakura fanart. While I'm certainly not a fan of the show, my sister is, and seeing as she has all 50 cards in her possession, I figured I'd try my hand at drawing/revising some of the the smaller rather chibi ones.Just the line art, for now, working on coloring it on P-hoto Chop.
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Isn't The Storm... a male card?
Anyway, the lineart's nice and all ^^
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I'm wondering why you put teh cloud (of course you did, cloud) in the center, when some of the others are infinitely more interesting, visually. The composition's pretty fairly weighted with teh sleepzor's strong contrast with those black slabs, and the busy zim-zam going on between teh sweet and teh.. what is that, bubble? Anyway, without the implied line between the storm's knee and the rain's outstretched leg, the right side would be falling off the page. The one concern is that it's a little bottom heavy. If you put some sort of border or background in the top sides, it would remove that sense of the cloud being displaced by the activity on the bottom. When you color this, be sure to use a limited palette, as I know you can, and sprinkle the colors you use all over the picture plane in order to achieve a sense of unity. Also keep a tight fist around color contrast, because the linework here is pretty uniform and you'll need the value shifts to make it really strong.
There's yer advanced crit.
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o.O I didn't actually mean, like, erm, what YOU get in art class. Geeze.
I was actually only going to have a few on there, and I started with The Cloud in the center, and ended up just leaving her there. I've been working on coloring it, but i still have a jpeg of just the line art, so when you come down, you can show me a few things.
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Oh, I'll be showing you a few things, but I don't know if you'll like them.
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Wow, dad, having a bad day? :/
You don't have to take it out on me, you know.
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What are you talking about?
That was said with a sexy tone, not a cranky tone.
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Ohh. Okay, then.
You know, tones of voice don't exactly transfer over the internet very well.
*huglove*
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nifty! i love the girl on the bottom. can't wait to see the colored version!
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