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Published: 2011-06-27 02:20:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1097; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description She said she loved me, but she had somewhere to go
She couldn't scream while I held her close
I swore I'd never let her go
(The Killers - Jenny was a friend of mine)


Kicking my own ass.

Drew this when I had my tablet for a month. Now I have it for almost 2 years. Aw, good old times. But I think I can do better now. Good to see I improved through the years, although I'm mostly under the impression I don't improve at all.

Karras, the Mechanists and the masked servants are from Thief: The Metal Age.
Designs are by me.

How far would you go?
Without me you’ll never know
If you want to learn to fly the only way is to let go
How far would you go?
It was the night last september
A redmark in your calender
What a mess, and you’re trying to break free
All in black now cross the borders
‘Cause I am back to give the orders
And confess
Have you been missing me?
Follow me,
And I will take the lead.
You can’t get of a train in full speed
(ASP - How far would you go?)
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Comments: 27

Sweet-Hime [2011-06-27 02:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


After looking at the old version of this, I do see some improvment. Its hard to spot improvment in you're own art e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> So keep that in mind.

I love everything about this picture. theTmask is very detailed, the hair the clothing. Over all it is a beautiful picture with lots of meaning behind it. I think you captured that very well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Though the only thing that bugs me is that the gold/yellow on the man isnt very blended in like the rest of the picture. I think that the shine of it doesn't need to be blended, but probley the shadows of it should be.

Though don't let that bug you. You have alot of talent for this, and the picture is still beautiful.

I wish you luck with you're art, and a delevopment as an artist.

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CSupernova In reply to Sweet-Hime [2011-06-28 21:44:23 +0000 UTC]

You're right with the man's metal chestplate. I tried to blend it a bit, but then it looked to smooth to be metal. If I find a way to make it look better, I will add it Thank you for the critique. I highly appreciate it.

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Sweet-Hime In reply to CSupernova [2011-06-28 23:46:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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pixichi [2015-04-07 09:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Woah....very intense picture here! My OC actually did become a masked servant of sorts for Karras. It didn't turn out so well...

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CSupernova In reply to pixichi [2015-04-07 13:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh I can imagine o.o

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pixichi In reply to CSupernova [2015-04-30 07:09:44 +0000 UTC]

If you're curious, here's how it happened: fav.me/d8la448

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Rose-Hunter [2011-07-08 17:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeowch. I don't think I'd ever go quite that far.

Becoming a masked servant is certain death.

Good picture though.

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CSupernova In reply to Rose-Hunter [2011-07-09 18:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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Rose-Hunter In reply to CSupernova [2011-07-20 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.

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Remmirath-ML [2011-07-02 18:21:31 +0000 UTC]

The improvements definitely show, especially in the shading! It looks really good.

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CSupernova In reply to Remmirath-ML [2011-07-04 15:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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Silena-89 [2011-06-30 19:20:17 +0000 UTC]

wow! great improvement! you should do more of these

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CSupernova In reply to Silena-89 [2011-06-30 19:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Of remakes? xD Maybe I will

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RainEDeliA [2011-06-30 08:31:26 +0000 UTC]

You've improved a lot!! This one looks better,more life-like and more 3-D compared to the old one! Keep improving!

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CSupernova In reply to RainEDeliA [2011-06-30 20:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Nx3Fox [2011-06-27 21:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Improvement is clearly visible in nerly every aspect.
Background fits better ... looks smooth and shiny and is not as confusing as before.
Line flow improoved siginificantly. Smoother more fluid, determined lines.
Shading and transitiones improved a lot. Shapes and volume got more realistic.
There are distinct textures which make the picture more interesting and add to the realism.
Colours choice is more to the point and the shinyness adds the little extra umph ( but I am a sucker for shiny things )

Crop and layout is well chosen makes it even more interesting altough I am not a person who interprets stuff related to those things into pictures.

Keep it up and you will get even better

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CSupernova In reply to Nx3Fox [2011-06-29 22:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Ein verwirrender hintergrund war aber gar nicht so schlecht. Passte zum Thema. xD

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Skavenloft [2011-06-27 11:04:32 +0000 UTC]

smashing. Besy of u ever
theres power in it
and feeling

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CSupernova In reply to Skavenloft [2011-06-27 19:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, is it? Thank you xD

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Skavenloft In reply to CSupernova [2011-06-28 00:58:37 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure to see that u can mde something as good as this one

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CSupernova In reply to Skavenloft [2011-06-28 15:13:38 +0000 UTC]

*_*

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Skavenloft In reply to CSupernova [2011-06-28 18:21:26 +0000 UTC]

Just keep doin good job

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Ave321 [2011-06-27 10:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Hemy and her mask! I love this!

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CSupernova In reply to Ave321 [2011-06-27 19:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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holysunlight [2011-06-27 08:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Doch, da sieht man schon einiges. Die Gesichter sahen damals alle zweidimensionaler aus, sieht man zB am Mund der Maske oder Karass' Gesicht.

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CSupernova In reply to holysunlight [2011-06-27 19:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Danke. Direkter vergleich ist doch manchmal was gutes. xD

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holysunlight In reply to CSupernova [2011-06-27 19:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Stimmt. Sonst übersieht man das leicht, denn radikal geändert hat sich ja nichts.

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