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Published: 2010-06-01 01:28:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2744; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 12
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Another page, more explanation and more tooth brushing. ^^All comments welcome. Shonen-ai warning.
Dragonriders of Pern is copyrighted by Anne & Todd McCaffrey
The characters and situations are my own
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Meanwhile at Benden...
"I want to hide out here until we're out of the continuity that Todd writes! So...say...3 passes or so?"
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AHHHH!!!! cant believe i let this story skip my mind... *smacks head on desk* *how could I * this is amazing!!!
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umm... now i cant even remember wat i said lol i sry if it was wierd lol
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Oh... sounds like somebody is worried for their special friend!
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I hate waiting for the next page! lol Love these!
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The anticipation is half the fun though right? right?
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yeah, I know it sucks. >_0
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Lol...I guess it it.
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LOVE~! Poor dragons, not liking their teeth being brushed. XD Awesome. <3
(Spotted a typo, sorry to nitpick - "Gone? Gone where? Who's gpne?")
I love this story so much. <3 <3 <3
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Sorry! >_< Can't help it, used to be a proof-reader for a magazine.
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No worries, I wouldn't want to leave the page up with a glaring typo anyway.
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English major moment- You misspelled a word. >.<
Other than that, SO SAD! *Wants K`mlar back at Ista now for other dude.*
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Fixed it!
Hehe, other dude! You don't even know his name??
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I remember J`larian, I just forgot his name the other day. =^.^;=
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J'lantir actually. K'or called him J'larian by mistake in an early page.
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Ah. That is how I kept referring to him. Oops! XD
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Toothing! Those dragons are going to enjoy having clean teeth, they just don't know it yet.
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They'll enjoy keeping their teeth into old age too. ^^
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OMG! YAY! More GoP!!! I love it! K'mlar's been at Benden for three months?!
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Yep, mostly for the reasons that S'ouren said, or maaaybe not...dun dun dun!
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*GASP* I await more! Can't wait
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The potential bloom of a relationship is being put to the test! The suspense is almost killing me! c:
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yeah, and maybe K'mlar's having all sorts of fun with K'or at Benden. What is keeping him from coming back? Hm?? ^^
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I have a feeling this page leads into a nice transition for the next seen. It took me a moment to remember why they had brushes. xD
Also, you used the word "year" again, instead of "Turn"
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Where? Oh, is there a Pern word for month?
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"Benden's so much nicer than Ista at this time of -year-..."
Not that I know of. Weeks are sevendays, years are Turns, but months seems to be the one that's kept everyone guessing. xD
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Oh...that'd be kind of weird to say this time of turn...but I guess you're right.
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It might sound odd to us in an Earth English sense, but the word 'year' disappeared completely from Pernese vocabulary, though in how many hundred years/Turns I'm not sure. By the 9th Pass there's no trace of it. So to Pernese ears, "this time of Turn" -- or whatever phrase they did use -- would sound normal.
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spell check gone. 'gone? gone where? who's gpne?'
otherwise, good angles!
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It's been a while since I commented.... but, oh! K'mlar's gone and stayed at Benden, hasn't he? I wonder if the Benden Weyrwoman has anything to do with it or if something's happened there. I can't wait to find out!
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gpne? just buggin, but it sounds like a bit of yaoi emoism with J which brings me back to i'm busy cooking jean's point. now to patiently wait for the next installment. cya
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I fixed that typo! That's what I get for rushing a page.
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now the size of the new G is displeasing smaller! lol jkjk, or maybe, this message is approved by my priest, who dies' to much. cya
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