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She just basically sits therepretending her spoon is a microphone
BUT OUT OF THE 3 DESIGNED SO FAR THIS HAS BEEN THE WORSE/MOST BADLY DRAWN ;'(
please point out any other mistakes
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lolhammy [2011-04-27 17:18:41 +0000 UTC]
Her arm looks broken, she has no thumb in the upper right one, considering the waistline and the neck and the probable it is impossible to get out and in that dress without cutting it open, her rib cage has a very deformed shape, that's not how spoons work, her neck is not a neck, she has no wrist (or any other form of hand anatomy) and well, yeah, her eyes.
[link] >Rib cages are sort of round. While a normal rib cage would be pointing upwards (^) yours appears to point downwards (V). Other than that, the chest's flesh around the ribs makes the body sort of straight [link] , to get a really thin waist like hers (which does not appear to support space for vital organs) one would need to first develop some curves and namely larger hips, which make the visual effect of being thin on the waistline. Seeing as she appears underage (being flat and all) I do not think she would have such hips or womanly curves in any other way, nor a grown chest due to frequent workouts (a chest may be bigger due to muscles also visually suggesting a thinner waist, but this is mainly for men). This is why her chest would be pretty straight and not that impossibly thin (see this for reference: [link] ). For the elbow: [link] (best picture I could find that quick, sorry). Neck: [link] Necks are actually a lot thicker than usually portrayed. They will be slightly thicker than the span of one's mouth, but thinner than the actual jawline. Simply put: her neck could be twice as thick and less ) ( and more | |.
As for the hands: [link] [link] [link] [link] ... And well, so on. Google is your friend when it comes to stock images to use for anatomy of most everything.
As for the dress: It needs an opening. She has to wash her clothes sometimes, right? An opening at the front is possible [link] , but I think you'd prefer [link] this kind of opening because it lets you keep the nice collar. She'll need this because if that dress is silk, or actually anything without elastan, she cannot worm her head through /that/ neck opening.
Lastly: [link]
Hope that was informative.
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CuSith107 In reply to lolhammy [2011-04-29 11:29:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
I printed off the links you sent me so I can use them as reference
and I shall redraw this!
(right now I don't really know what to say :') a huge thank you for sending me all those links and thank you for going out of your time to point out the mistakes. It really means a lot to me )
Now I shall sketch out some anatomy before redoing this image and uploading it!
Thank you lolhammy!
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lolhammy In reply to lolhammy [2011-04-27 17:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh and this is a simple illustration for head anatomy for the side of the head: [link] . Yeah.
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