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CutePencilCase — Random Pony Creator-Quick Glow

Published: 2016-04-26 22:19:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 419; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 9
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Description Today I decided to try the random pony creator thing I did some time ago. The colors weren't really working for me, so I changed her a lot. I'm a bit unsure if the mane looks different enough to don't scream PONY CREATOR

About Her:
She isn't the biggest fan of waiting, and the fastest way of upsetting her is probably making her wait in a line.
Even so, she can still appreciate a beautiful view and stare at it for as long as she is allowed
She doesn't have a fixed home since she is most of the time traveling. She sleeps at hotels or post offices and sometimes at her parents or sister's houses.
To compensate for her lack of wings she had specialized at speed spells. She also knows some reinforcement spells (so her rollerblades don't break) and basic spells like floating small objects
Her special talent is Quick Delivery

Story:
Glow was born in a small village. During her first years of life, she and her bigger sister played on the fields all day long. But as her sister got older and started showing great magic capabilities, her parents decided that she should go to Canterlot to get better studies.
Glow had never been away from her sister so long and missed her a lot. Her sister probably felt the same, because she received a letter from her the next week. And this way the two sisters started to change letters.

As the time went on, Glow and the mail pony started developing a strong friendship. The mail pony would come and tell Glow amazing stories of other places of Equestria that Glow couldn't even imagine.
Glow was very late at receiving her cutie mark, but she didn't mind it, because she had decided that she would be a mail pony, and nothing else mattered.

It was a difficult path since mail ponies are traditionally pegasi, but she didn't mind, she wanted to see all those amazing places the mail pony had told her about and, more important, she wanted to give the same happiness as she had received every time the mail pony would come to her home

With a lot of help from her mentor, her orange rollerblades, and advanced speed spells, she eventually graduated. Now she is an honored Mail Mare, specialized on urgent deliveries (although she sometimes sneaks in some letters from homesick fillies inside her bag, so they get to the destiny faster)


Cutie Mark:

The first days at mail pony school weren't easy. She tried everything, but she would be slower than any pegasi no matter what. Each mail pony recruit had a mentor assigned whose job was making the best they could to make them succeed. In order to make Glow faster, her mentor gave her rollerblades and they would go to the library often, looking for spells that could help.

One of those days her mentor had to leave running because she was late for some deliveries and left a letter on the table.

Glow was too slow and couldn't catch her mentor so she decided to deliver the letter herself. She made a speed spell on her rollerblades and there she went. She may have exaggerated a bit and bumped into some people, but it was all worth it when she saw the little filly that received the letter glow in happiness.
And at that moment she understood that that was her special talent and she received her cutie mark, a letter with an orange speed trail behind.
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Comments: 3

Dudlings [2016-04-27 07:08:55 +0000 UTC]

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She's very cute, nothing new with your style. I love the way you edited the mane without changing it completely. I also like the way you added Orange all threw the design. I think it was a good idea to change the coat colour from green to that greyish colour, the green would have clashed.i would have loved to see you use the freckles that were one the 'original' pony. You also could have made the bag less.. Bland? Idk it looks a little empty. Try adding a button or a crest, however that might make it look a little over crowed

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CutePencilCase In reply to Dudlings [2016-04-27 14:39:57 +0000 UTC]

I completly forgot the freckles, she would have looked cuter with them!
The idea of the bottons is great, I think that two buttons, one purple and another one orange would give it more color and feel more integrated with the characther

Thank very much for the awsome comment, I'm such a noob at creating OCs

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Dudlings In reply to CutePencilCase [2016-04-27 21:04:49 +0000 UTC]

She is already cute, but yes she would be cuter :3
I think that would work, but if you going to have two, don't make them too big!

nah you not, all of them are great :3

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