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Published: 2016-12-15 18:59:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 3925; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 7
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Here's the part 5. I'm sorry to be death for months, I was in college, finally it was pretty well. Enjoy!I don't know if Sans' joke is NOT bad enough to make Alphys laugh, you could tell me.
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This comic is hilarious so far, however, it says "avoiding" where it should say "preventing".
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Thanks! Also, thank you so much for telling me that mistake, it helps to make the comic better 
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You're welcome! I can't remember all the exact mistakes, but maybe you could just go back over the comic to check for mistakes.
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Yes, I found some of them, mostly related to grammar and spelling. The problem is there are some I can't recognize: since there are some phrases I've never listen in english, I try to make them myself, choosing the words I know. But some of the words I use, they might not sound well in some sentences, or don't work in specific contexts (such as avoid or prevent). That's why I'm asking for help to every person who notice that kind of mistakes.
Other than that, Thank you so much for the watch!!! I really apreciate your support.
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Wow, part 5 and no grim joke from Mandy. Something's wrong. And yes I just started reading this comic.
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Oh, yeah. I forgot those jokes. I could take them into account when drawing the next parts, but I haven't think about one yet
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Omg! I bet if Mandy meets chara, she's going to make chara look like temmie next to her and scare chara half to death. Also, make Mandy meet flowey.
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About Chara we'll see what will happen. Now, about Flowey, sorry buddy, the part 4 is the only one in which he will appear.
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ok... I have to admit... that was funny xD but uh... did you spell "slave" wrong on purpose?
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Oh, I missed that one, thanks so much! I'm gonna correct it. But, before I do that, did you see any other issue in the dialogs? It could help me so much to make the comic better.
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you're welcome and no. I just noticed because I'm more of a writer than an artist.
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Nice! Writing is beautiful, another way to make art
Well, the correction's done ^^
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