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CyanLights — Wip in need of advice
Published: 2015-05-06 05:31:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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I can't decide which composition I like. It might help if I take a break and come back later.Related content
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The one on the right side, I like that one. ^^ But then again Cyan, anything you do and work on has an inspiring light to it.
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C: I think I picked the right one then. Thank you so much!
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I like the one on the right personally, because you get two images of a head. The one on the left I'm having a harder time seeing what you were going for. XD I think there is a wolf under and behind the more detailed one?
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xD I never fully sketched the second wolf in either. I forgot to.
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Oops. XD lol I do that while planning.
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I like the one on the right, it's more dynamic and a lot more visually interesting when it's more off-center
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oh my god, this is gonna be amazing when done!
I want to watch you do it!!
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Thanks! I can stream it shortly if you would like.
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Sounds good. Feel free to note me anytime though and I can stream it.
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Yep. I will set it up.
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The one on the left seems a bit stiff, and the one on the right feels dynamic. I'd have to go with the right one.
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One on the right feels more balanced and comfortable at a glance
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Looking at the left one, something seems "missing" in my eyes. Maybe it's the composition? Though I roughly checked and you used the 1/3 rule in both images. (Roughly meaning: place your hand in front of the screen. xD)
Maybe it is that the dynamism from the left one is leaning down-right, and there is nothing but a corner, whilst on the right you still have space.
I'd go for the right one.
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I think I am going for the right. Thanks for the help!
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I personally think the right one gives a much better focus on the character, and draws attention especially to the face. I guess it ultimately depends on what you plan to focus on?
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I'd have to say I like the left one ?
it looks more full and would give the viewer more things to look at with the background
and also wouldn't take away the spot light from the character since it's right in the middle of it all
the one on the right looks a bit bare to me ? But I'll just assume you didn't sketch the background
but either way, the left one-
the angle and depth of it really catches my attention. o/
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You bring up a lot of good points. I will have to consider this.
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Composition wise the one on the right is stronger.
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I like the right one better but the left one looks oddly messy, is there a lot more detail in that one, cause I can't really tell what's happening in that one?
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I started sketching out the background in the left one.
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ah, I think I still like the room you have in the right one. I can't wait to see it finished, whichever one you choose
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Thanks! I think I might go with the right one.
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No problem 
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