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Published: 2019-03-10 12:43:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 941; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 0
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lol i suck at making clothes XDlike a friend said
you don't see people wearing the same clothes all the days XD
(well if you don't bathe it's other story XD)
well
obviously she have more clothes but these are like
the principal ones
every clothe has a meaning for her XD
and yeah she loves kimonos lol
will put some updated info about her bc the last reference sheet
well i won't use it anymore i changed her story in a 100% XD
but won't tell anything bc i don't want to spoil and i want to make
a story with her uwu
Check her toyhose lol:
toyhou.se/3548043.eclipse
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Clothes:
1- Blue kimono:
-she uses it when she's meditating or when she's in the city
2- Training outfit:
-she uses it the most of the time
-used for training , battles , etc.
3- Red Kimono
-Just for special moments
-Given by an important person
- Red fan with Fire Powers
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Info:
Name: Eclipse
Surname: --
Nickname: --
Age: 17
-Vegetarian
Song: still looking for it lol
-Japanese Like
Order: eclipse order
Weapon:
-katana
-Bamboo stick
- Fire Fan
Powers:
-She can control fire , darkness and light, but she's still like an ''apprentice'' at that XD
-she can understand animals
-Her powers get increased a lot in eclipses
and other things but yeah
that will a spoiler so shh ouo
Work: she's a princess but she doesn't know it (little spoiler)
Nature: Jolly, very kind, extremely sincere, protector , naive , brave , strong
Allergies: - - -
Fears:
-small places (Claustrophobic)
Likes: bamboo plants, tigers, meditation, music, bad puns, reading books, wearing kimonos and fresh clothes
"She is a confident girl, who doesn't fear to protect those that she loves, loves to be different from others and despite all the weight of her past in her life, She always continues with a big smile (and can kick you in da face if you bother her XD) "
Dislikes: Dresses
Stats:
Attack (fisic): 6,5/10
Attack (special): 8/10
Endurance: 7/10
Intelligence: 9/10
Agility: 8/10
Vision: 6/10
Sociability: 7/10
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Comments: 8
TennoEBNLStudio [2019-03-12 09:40:27 +0000 UTC]
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Nice! your colors and shading are lovely <3
But- The foreheads HELLA tall- SHe gotta 7 head, also on the blue kimono, it doesn't fold with her step, its just straight down, Yes most clothes like that dont, but they at least have a little movement with the thigh.
The outfits are Very good, but the red one should have the left side sleeve a little longer, just to fit the other side more, (or im wrong, i just tend to think about when she lowers her arm.)
Other wise, its all good! (tho idk if the red eyes look good with it, i mean shes cute yes, but the eyes are just... Meh? Experiment a little more with the eyes, (and hair. White is good with alot but here, its just meh.))
Cute design! keep up the good work!
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CyberEngel In reply to TennoEBNLStudio [2019-03-12 17:05:44 +0000 UTC]
thak u so much for the critique <3
i will consider it : D
it will help me improving
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cloudtabaxi [2019-03-10 23:47:54 +0000 UTC]
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I really like your art style, however, there are a few things that I will write that you may take into consideration but I don't expect you to change - it's just my opinion.
1. Clothes
The clothes are actually really nice designs. For my personal preference though, the kimono on the first design is a bit short. That's just me though. If I were to draw it I'd make it a tad longer, maybe just above the knees.
Also, the kimono on the right, the red one. Just with the very right arm sleeve. You've drawn the bottom as if her arm is down like the other one is, but the arm bends at the elbow, which would lift the bottom of the hanging part unless the sleeve was to collect in the inner elbow. Also the same with the left sleeve on the chibi for this outfit.
2. Chibis
The only thing I can find wrong with the chibis are the faces. I think if the cheeks were closer to the rest of the face, not as pointy, that it may look better.
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CyberEngel In reply to cloudtabaxi [2019-03-11 06:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Tysm for the critique <3
I will consider all
Thank you for being supportive : D
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