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Published: 2008-09-14 07:16:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 2496; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 14
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well in this comic scene i kinda wanted to show why shockwave left...once u hear it, i bet youll know right away why megatron told him to be in another special secret assignment. and left the search of the allspark...well ill let u wonder why...try n tell me come on out with it xD...anyways this would be page 2 of .....my untitled tfa comic ;.;' still havent thought of a name or a cover page for that matter ^^'....here the panels...1st panel: Steelflare: Incoming message from shockwave. Shall I put it through?
2nd panel: Cyberwing: Yea, yea...go right ahead. Its probably some "more" useless information.
3rd panel: Cyberwing: Ah shockwave. what is your report this time?
Shockwave:Hm, it seems Megatron ordered me to another assignment. So i will not be able to search for the "Allspark" with you guys any further.
4th panel: Cyberwing: WHAT?! So you just expect me and Steelflare to just find it by ourselves?! This is B-Barbaric! Whats Megatron thinking?!
5th panel: Shockwave: Sorry. Orders are orders. *shockwave out*
Cyberwing (c) me
Steelflare (c) Krista
Shockwave (c) Hasbro Transformers Animated 2008
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yep especially when he tries to be like oh im to better for u so megs is putting me somewhere better x3
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SHOCKWAVE!!! Loved it XD I can't wait to read more, if you are willing to tell me what exactly is going to hapen throug the story, I could try and come up with a name if you like. And just one more thing, i don't mean to sound like a nagger or a winger or anything like that, but if you really want Shockwave to have a more....realistic? Character, if you wanted, you could make him sound a little more formal, so he's in character, BUT, you don't have to, it's JUST a suggestion, and I hope i didn't offend you in any way, becasue I am really liking this comic so far!
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oh? you think you could give me some pointers or examples? im not much of knowledge of shockwave xP lol basicly my comic starts after the decepticons were driven off cybertron n here is a search crew one of many that megatron had came up with in search for the allspark, but as u can see megatron orders shockwave to b a spy aka...autoboot camp ; ) >> but yea i dunno im having a hard time thinking for the third page now ^^''
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Yeah I would love to help ^^ Aww, and you will get there, don't worry, you have a creative mind
Um...with Shockwave, you just have to remember that he talks hell formal, so instead of saying something like..."I'm a gunna check the computer for you Sir." He's say it like...."Yes your excellancy, I will just check Cybertron's data core." Or something like that. He uses pretty smart words and is never really a slang kinda mech. Also, he would never betray Megatron, he's pretty much Megatron's right hand man. He's kill anyone who defies him and will do anything to please his Master XD
I really hope that made sense! If not, I will try and come up with some more examples ^^ He speaks REALLY proper...kinda posh I guess-seeing he DOES have a British accent. [LOVE]
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You always do a great job coloring! Looks very nice.
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