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Cyolleen — Running Away
Published: 2012-04-10 01:49:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 384; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 1
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so bad at titles >_<''but i think the picture came out all right >u<
except for that back leg. it just looks awkward
This is for *pokemonshadow 's Contest!!
Last minute entry x3
i made a little watermark in the corner :3
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I think this is a very attractive piece!
First, I like the placement and balance, it really brings your eye around the piece, you didn't center everything so it was easier reviewing the surroundings. I love the fursona-ness, the hair, and the color scheme. It is really well put together, and well developed. There are very few things that I noticed though. For instance, by the back left leg where that shadow is, you should blur it like the rest, to create a softer look, and it'll balance a little better. The moon is very large, and maybe too large, but maybe that's how you thought it should look, however, so I also take that into account. Otherwise this is a very bright, nice piece. Good job!
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Thank you for the critique! :3
I agree with what you said about the back leg. I wanted the moon to be large but your right that i made it a little too big. >w<
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But I really do love the picture overall. :3
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I, Myself in my opinion, think this is a beatiful piece.
I will start out saying what i like about it, than what your should cahnge or dont like about it.
I love how you drew the backround-verybeatiful-
I love how you made the character stand (or run xD)
I love almost everything about this piece. c:
Now, what i think you should of done with the left ear is mover it a little farther to the left.
I also think you should have made the tie and the oval on her head a bit bigger, and the tail a bit smaller.
I also think the moon is to big.
Sorry if all that sounded mean or anything.
But i do love this piece very much.
And, hey, all art work has its mistakes, its not like you can make it perfect, there is no such thing.
Thank you for taking the time to read this all.
:3
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thank you so much for the critique!
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yay! thank you for picking mine for first place ;u;
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Beautiful! I love your style without any lines. Its different and wimsical.
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Just wanted to say that i absolutely love this picture. The detail on it is really good without going overboard on it. The shading is really well done as well. When i first saw this picture i was intrigued by it. But when i actually saw the full version of it... well lets just say that i was blown away. Mostly on how well you managed the grass detail and the character detail. The character didn't look rushed which was nice, i mean you can really appreciate the time that went into making this This art is going into my favorites for sure.
Please keep up the amazing work! I look forward to seeing more art from you!
Sincerely Lord-Lemons
(P.S. i just realized this is a comment lol)
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Beautiful image <3 Everything about it is lovely... the grass, the moon, the pose, the colours and atmosphere. Well done ;u; the eyes are stunning.
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