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Published: 2011-09-05 09:35:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 2021; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 38
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inspiration;My head is stuck in the clouds
She begs me to come down
Says "Boy quit foolin' around"
I told her "I love the view from up here
Warm sun and wind in my ear
We'll watch the world from above
As it turns to the rhythm of love"
Rhythm of Love, Plain White Ts
comments;EH MAH GOSH,
MY FIRST EVER COMMISSION YAYYYY
It was so fun to do, this is Riki, a strawberry dappled roan [god dapples are hard to paint!] and this has to be one of the most extreme colour changes I've done so far. I know the sky blending isn't amazing but I tried a new method so ignore that xD anyway, this is a Gold Commission for ~AlyAngel97 , want your own commission? Click here -[link]
if you critique, being constructive is a must, please, no nit picking or just being plain rude as I don't want my confidence to get shattered
credits; all used with permissionHorse -
Background - and
All Else - Handpainted by harrybabeonhowrse.deviantart.com aka starski
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Comments: 23
naww i love every part of this! the song, the sky, the mountains, your mane and tail- ITS STUNNING! Im viewing your entire gallery and every single manip is the work of an angel
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thanks so much for providing it! <3
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Absolutly stunning picture!
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aww, thanks for providing it!
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oooooohh!!!! I haven' looked at your stuff in a while! you have gotten SO much better since the last time I saw your work!
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haha, yes 
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oooo, this has to be one of your best. Wonderful colour change.
The only bit of improvement I could suggest is where you have the light hitting the horses back may cast a shadow to the left.
But seriously hun, this is amazing. Well done.
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Oh, the rear left and the front right leg also (for looking like they're in the rock).
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Critiquing!
Good - Personally, I think this whole manip is *almost* spotless, there are just a few little spots that could be cleared up slightly. I just love the markings on the horse's eyes, absolutley beautiful, and the colour change is flawless! I think the sky blending is also flawless, I don't see what you have against it! The lighting is perfect, nothing I can say about that, and did you paint that love heart on the clouds? Gorgeous touch!
Improvements - As I said, there are very very few things to be improved, I can only find 3 small things that ...I dont think are being nit picky....you decide lol, if they are I'm sorry =/ Firstly, I think there are a few too many dapples on the horses face, or they are too distinctive, and could be slightly faded to add to the manip's realism. Also, when looking at the horses hooves, I think the horse could be moved slightly forward, as its rear left leg appears to be in the rock slightly, rather than the grass. Lastly, the background is just a bit off the colour of the horse, I think if you made the background slightly pink/redder, it would fit *perfectly*. As I say, those are the only mistakes I can spot, and they're not even very prominent unless you look for them, I hope i wasnt being too nit-picky
Overall, this manip is gorgeous, and I can only fault it those 3 ways, I hope my critique is constructive enough for you, and keep making beautiful artwork! Well Done!
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okay, I think the dapples on the face are fine, lol, soI don't agree with that - but I did what the customer told me, I didn't want a 'reddish' manip and i did a lot of other colour filters to get it to match, so that is why it's not all one colour scheme
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Ohkay Dokay 
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I looooveee this!! That horse is so pretty! <3
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aww, thank you <3
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Most welcome ^.^ x
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UNBURWNBUPWNBUWNBUNWU! hOLY mOLY! that's amazing!
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aww, haha, thank you <3
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