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Published: 2007-02-18 06:16:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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I'm feeling lonely tonightI don't wan't to get to sleep
I don't wan't to be alone
The silence of the night scares me
The darkness makes me wonder what is it hinding to me
For being so dark..
I don't wan't to be lonely anymore
My lonelyness makes me think tonight
Why don't I do something?
Why don't I do something to change all of this?
I don't know why...
I'm all alone...
That's why...
My lonelyness makes me think tonight
It makes me wan't to leave
It makes me shed some tears
Why am I lonely tonight?
I don't know why...
All I wan't is a friend...to hold my hand
All I wan't is a lover...to make me feal loved
All I wan't is you...to stop the lonelyness from killing me
I'm all lonely in the night...why aren't you here with me?
I'm all lonely tonight again...
Crying for you..who will not come I see...
Then..tomorow night?
I will be waiting..
I love you..
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Comments: 24
DeathBeliever [2009-05-15 19:26:04 +0000 UTC]
C'est vraiment beau ce que tu as écrit! T'es vraiment bonne, tu devrais écrire (ou publié plus souvent, c'est touchant...
*Croise les doigts pour ne pas être reconnu*
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DaemonP In reply to DeathBeliever [2009-05-15 20:14:07 +0000 UTC]
wow merci! Ca doit bien faire 2 ans que j'ai écrit ce texte, il m'était sortit de la tête ^^
Et non tu n'es pas reconnu cher inconnu
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DeathBeliever In reply to DaemonP [2009-05-19 03:06:01 +0000 UTC]
2 ans ...Tu en as écris d'autres depuis?
*Pourtant c'est pas si difficile à trouver, quelqu'un d'aussi curieux ^^*
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DaemonP In reply to DeathBeliever [2009-05-19 03:52:21 +0000 UTC]
Oui mais je ne sais pas s'ils valent la peine d'être mis ici
Enfin si, un que je vais mettre maintenant
*Pourtant juste avec un surnom de m^çeme non je trouve pas*
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DeathBeliever In reply to DaemonP [2009-05-19 21:18:27 +0000 UTC]
Je vois que tu as suivis mes conseils et afficher d'autres poèmes ^^. Bon, je me dévoile. Je suis le mystérieux K. Quelqu'un de près et de loin à la fois ^^.
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DeathBeliever In reply to DaemonP [2009-05-20 19:36:48 +0000 UTC]
Donc, tu n'as pas encore trouvé...Mais, c'est Kirvor ^^.
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DaemonP In reply to DeathBeliever [2009-05-20 21:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah toi alors! Tu me suis partout
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DeathBeliever In reply to DaemonP [2009-05-21 16:23:26 +0000 UTC]
C'est ça quand on a du talent ^^.
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secondbass [2008-01-01 00:48:20 +0000 UTC]
You really touched my soul..
That's what I'm feeling just now..
Hope that's not your lonelyness, but my despair I feel deep inside it..
Love, Mike
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DaemonP In reply to secondbass [2008-01-01 07:45:49 +0000 UTC]
it was, still does sometimes alone... but heh, tomorow's an another day, and it's never the same
thank you very much for your comment
bucket of love
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reachthetop [2007-12-14 05:38:41 +0000 UTC]
Your work has been featured [here!!! what are you waiting for? go ahead and look!]
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chossette40 [2007-02-20 03:40:25 +0000 UTC]
feel like that too often also...
Love ya Laurence, I'd sleep with you everynight we're alone if I could...
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DaemonP [2007-02-18 06:24:36 +0000 UTC]
I am feeling sad tonight...
I wrote what I ressented...
I feel lonely and scared
anyways..it comes out and I feel slitly better after
thanks for the comments
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RedWombat [2007-02-18 06:18:24 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, almost harsh and painful with soft edges, as if you could shed away the pain to empty sobs that wretch at the throat.
Or perhaps that's my mind-set now, as the dark presses up against my windows.
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