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PLEASE FOR THE LIFE OF ME- CRITICIZE!! I don't want to make another Team Killer rip-off. Okay! Here we go;

Special thanks to for most of the back-story. If I can improve something please tell me. I want effective criticism that will improve what I have so far.

The Specter Scout: Born as Terry Rogers in 1992 was known for being a true servant of the RED organization. Started as a normal citizen of Teufort until one day, he gets into a bar-fight with a member of team BLU. He killed him with a broken bottle but managed to escape before the police could get him. He later joined the RED organization for the pure rush of killing the B.L.U. employees. He fought against them with such fury and malice that even some of the REDs questioned what the BLUs had ever done to deserve such brutality. When asked, all Terry would say when asked about it was "I'm just doing my job... And I'm quite sure that I enjoy it."

After Redmond and Blutarch died, the REDs and BLUs united under a treaty of peace. However, this pissed off Terry resulting in him leaving the RED team- refusing to fight side-by-side with BLU members. After vanishing for a noticeably long time, he completely changed his style and now hunts down, terrorizes, and kills both BLUs and REDs alike.

His reason is his own, but it's most likely that he claims that their "treason" is his "reason".

Well...That's what I have so far. As said earlier, I want criticism and help with this. If you got any ideas then please contact me. I'm open to suggestions.

Description
PLEASE FOR THE LIFE OF ME- CRITICIZE!! I don't want to make another Team Killer rip-off. Okay! Here we go;

Special thanks to for most of the back-story. If I can improve something please tell me. I want effective criticism that will improve what I have so far.

The Specter Scout: Born as Terry Rogers in 1992 was known for being a true servant of the RED organization. Started as a normal citizen of Teufort until one day, he gets into a bar-fight with a member of team BLU. He killed him with a broken bottle but managed to escape before the police could get him. He later joined the RED organization for the pure rush of killing the B.L.U. employees. He fought against them with such fury and malice that even some of the REDs questioned what the BLUs had ever done to deserve such brutality. When asked, all Terry would say when asked about it was "I'm just doing my job... And I'm quite sure that I enjoy it."

After Redmond and Blutarch died, the REDs and BLUs united under a treaty of peace. However, this pissed off Terry resulting in him leaving the RED team- refusing to fight side-by-side with BLU members. After vanishing for a noticeably long time, he completely changed his style and now hunts down, terrorizes, and kills both BLUs and REDs alike.

His reason is his own, but it's most likely that he claims that their "treason" is his "reason".

Well...That's what I have so far. As said earlier, I want criticism and help with this. If you got any ideas then please contact me. I'm open to suggestions.