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Dahdtoudi — Take me with you

Published: 2007-11-13 23:52:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3879; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 10
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Description ~*~...Take me with you ~*~

Kyoji sat in boredom against the wall of the ravine, another long day of training had passed and he was almost certain he had learned everything he could from his trainer, Katsumi. He had already decided, tonight would be his last night with the group.

He would miss Katsumi the most, she was like his actual mother no matter how hard she was on him. He had even grown quiet close to his teammates. The spunky and loud mouth guy, Toyo and his sweeter teammate Jun.

His decision was final, he had to learn more, he had to become stronger. Kyoji had planned on leaving for Konoha to be trained by the same person that trained his real mother, Lady Tsunade. Unfortunately she was someone not easily found and had disappeared from Konoha a couple years earlier. His next choice was a student of hers, even rumored to be more skilled than Tsunade herself. Sakura Haruno. Kyoji would find her and prove he could make a worthy student.

Kyoji’s ear twitched when he heard footsteps approaching his position, it was obviously Jun, each step she took seemed so unsure but she kept walking closer anyways.

Jun finally stopped, standing straight across from Kyoji. She held a small basket of fruits out in front of her, she had brought it in hopes of sharing it with him. “Kyoji….I…”

Before she could even finish Kyoji spoke up, “I’m not hungry.”

Jun’s eyes saddened for a moment, he hadn’t even opened his eyes to look up at her, he hadn’t even given her a chance. “But you haven’t eaten all day.”

Kyoji’s eyes remained closed as he sat in silence for a few more moments. He would have kept his cold appearance if it wasn’t for the fact she hadn’t moved. She was still just standing there, looking down at him. He hated it whenever they were alone together, he always seemed to find it hard to breath, especially when he saw her smile. Deep down he knew exactly what his true feelings were, but he didn’t want to admit them to her.

Jun took a small step forward and sat in front of him, “Come on, just eat something and I’ll leave ok?”

He could actually hear her smiling as she spoke so he finally decided to look up at her. His eyes shifted from her own, down to the fruit then he shook his head and remained silent.

Jun wasn’t unaware of Kyoji’s plans, in fact the whole group knew. He was acting more cold than usual and she knew why. “…You’re planning on leaving soon, aren’t you?”

Kyoji stared back at her, looking her square in the eyes as he spoke, “Tonight is the last night I will stay here.”


Jun swallowed hard and felt her heart throb more painfully than ever, there was no doubt in her mind, she loved Kyoji. She had spent every day with him for the past 4 years, she had even been here a whole year longer than Toyo, their other male teammate. She felt tears rising to her eyes and tried her hardest not to release them. “What? But that’s so soon…don’t you want to plan about it some more?”

Kyoji saw the sadness in her eyes and had to look away, he hated the feelings he had for her and refused to submit to them. “If you’re going to cry just leave, Katsumi is not the only person that finds that annoying. My decision is final.”

His words cut her deep, she actually felt a tear slip from her eyes, “It’s final?…Then Kyoji, I want to go with you.”

Kyoji’s eyes narrowed but he didn’t look back at her, “No… you are part of the reason I want to leave.”

Jun’s grip tightened on her little basket as a slight gasp escaped her, “What? You want to leave because of me?”

Kyoji sighed a little annoyed before his voice grew more cold, “I hate the way you make me feel, I hate that whenever I try to sleep I dream about you.” He got to his feet and glared down at her, “I hate it when I look at you….and find it hard to breath.”

Jun’s eyes widened in shock as she got to her feet, leaving her basket on the ground and stepping closer to Kyoji, “But….Kyoji, that’s love….and I feel it too but I don‘t hate it.”

Kyoji felt her embrace him, he even felt her silent tears seeping through his shirt but he did not hug her back.

“Kyoji, I love you more than anything….Please…” Jun was cut short once again as Kyoji’s cold words cut her deeper than ever.

“Love does not exist, that was one of my first lessons. It is a confusing illusion that will only get you hurt.” His hands were gentle as he pushed her away from him, “I will never love you Jun.” He turned and left, leaving Jun to stand in the ravine.

Jun stared at his back as he walked away from her and felt her anger rise, “How could you say that?!” She knew he wouldn’t turn and answer, she knew he would never acknowledge her feelings, even if he felt the same way.

Kyoji kept walking forward, no matter how heavy his heart felt, he would not accept the feeling nor look back at Jun.

End???

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There's the little story that goes with it
Sux but couldn't resist.
I love the relationship between Sakura and Sasuke
so Kyoji and Jun are gonna have something similar. Only
poor Jun was already completely rejected and I don't think after that...she's gonna really like Kyoji as much

So this is the first time most of you have even heard of Jun
she is the female teammate of Kyoji's, Toyo is the other male and he's still in the developing stage...like I have no clue what he's gonna look like yet XD I'll try to get a better pic of Jun done too

She's one of my fav characters now, she will be a genjutsu specialist. She's very sweet and feisty, Kinda Tenten's personality but even nicer....most of the time, she can have her bitch fits

Jun, Kyoji, image and story (c) Me ^ ^
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Comments: 104

Dahdtoudi In reply to ??? [2007-11-22 02:00:14 +0000 UTC]

XDDD He can be cold

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Rhapsody-Girly In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-22 02:01:40 +0000 UTC]

-sniff- not fair he is to cute to be thatcold... ^w^

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Rhapsody-Girly [2007-11-22 02:13:01 +0000 UTC]

XDD He's my emo loner XDD

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Rhapsody-Girly In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-22 02:13:45 +0000 UTC]

hehe ^w^seem that everyone has an emo.. have you seen my emo dude Sorono?

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Rhapsody-Girly [2007-11-22 02:18:08 +0000 UTC]

No send me a link

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Rhapsody-Girly In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-22 02:21:46 +0000 UTC]

kk ^w^

[link] one in green

[link] one with green hair

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Rhapsody-Girly [2007-11-22 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]

haha! They look awesome!

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Rhapsody-Girly In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-22 02:52:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks.. its same persone though once he gets older his hair turns black with green bangs

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ElvenHottie2006 [2007-11-21 02:54:55 +0000 UTC]

GAH!!! I WANT MORE!!! >< I wanna know what happens!!!! very kewt

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Dahdtoudi In reply to ElvenHottie2006 [2007-11-21 04:43:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm wrting up a little something now I just wanna make a preview piccy too

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ElvenHottie2006 In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-21 20:21:04 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!! ^^ hehe.

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MissDarkShiva [2007-11-17 19:57:02 +0000 UTC]

So sad

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DarkDreamsPrincess [2007-11-17 03:21:58 +0000 UTC]

AAWW THATS SO CUTE BUT SAD THEY BELONG TOGETHER 4 SURE

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Dahdtoudi In reply to DarkDreamsPrincess [2007-11-17 06:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DarkDreamsPrincess In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-17 18:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Ya Welcome, Dose he go train with Sakura or Kabuto?

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Dahdtoudi In reply to DarkDreamsPrincess [2007-11-17 23:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Sakura, he already knows most of Kabuto's techniques

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DarkDreamsPrincess In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-18 01:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Is it ok if he becomes friends,well kinda fiends with My NG OC Shai shes Sakura's LIL girl ^^ Shes training with her mom to be one of the most well known medical Nin. and live up to her moms rep.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to DarkDreamsPrincess [2007-11-18 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]

awww, of course He'd probably end up meeting her XD

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DarkDreamsPrincess In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-18 03:05:25 +0000 UTC]

YAY I put up the pic of her can u check it out if u have time PLZ^^

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IDevourRamen [2007-11-16 22:17:51 +0000 UTC]

nice job i cant wait to see the next new 1

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Dahdtoudi In reply to IDevourRamen [2007-11-16 22:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^ ^

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IDevourRamen In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-19 21:45:22 +0000 UTC]

np

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N-I-V-E-K [2007-11-16 20:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work on their posturing and body language, and the writing here only helps to augment the piece! The coloring is marvelous, and I really like the background! Excellently done!

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Dahdtoudi In reply to N-I-V-E-K [2007-11-16 23:01:14 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you soo much

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N-I-V-E-K In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-17 01:16:55 +0000 UTC]

It was my pleasure, as I always look forward to seeing your works pop on in my Deviations list! xs 2

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IsisConstantine [2007-11-16 19:28:50 +0000 UTC]

neat

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Tossino [2007-11-15 18:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Aaawwww. He was taught that love was an illusion? That reminds me so much of Gaara in a weird way. Not really the same, but he was probably taught that love hurts too. And it does. So heart braking. Lovely pic too. Amazing.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Tossino [2007-11-16 00:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^ ^
Yeah, he kinda has Gaara's attitude toward love XD

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Tossino In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-16 06:00:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Gemineye88 [2007-11-14 21:07:08 +0000 UTC]

nice

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pyrasterran [2007-11-14 05:51:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't recommend the pentool lineart for these kind of pictures, it makes them look less like screenshots than they should.

..Unless screenshot-style wasn't your objective in this one, in which case, pentool away

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Dahdtoudi In reply to pyrasterran [2007-11-15 04:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm going overboard with it XDD
I like using it so much

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pyrasterran In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-15 05:34:32 +0000 UTC]

hey hey, is that my picture in your avatar?

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Dahdtoudi In reply to pyrasterran [2007-11-15 06:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes ^ ^ One of my all time favorite pics of Tosh XD

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pyrasterran In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-15 07:28:38 +0000 UTC]

^^

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pyrasterran [2007-11-14 05:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Jun looks pretty. I think she and Tera would get along.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to pyrasterran [2007-11-15 04:05:52 +0000 UTC]

They probably would

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rosychan [2007-11-14 04:56:47 +0000 UTC]

oh wow... that smoldering gaze is quite sexiful XD;;

he sees like a really complicated guy... yet when it comes down to it, really simple.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to rosychan [2007-11-15 04:06:32 +0000 UTC]

XDD So true

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2007-11-14 04:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Great read =3

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2007-11-15 04:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-15 04:34:22 +0000 UTC]

np :3

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2007-11-14 04:45:44 +0000 UTC]

and pic too =3

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sweetfire-05 [2007-11-14 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I love the story its so full of love and angst and makes me want more The story would make for a great doujin (sp?) actually it makes a great story over all bravo my dear Dahdtoudi

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Dahdtoudi In reply to sweetfire-05 [2007-11-14 03:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sooo much

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TheDitzyNarshmellow [2007-11-14 02:43:06 +0000 UTC]

WAH! Kyori's so cruel..........

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Dahdtoudi In reply to TheDitzyNarshmellow [2007-11-14 02:46:10 +0000 UTC]

XDD Kyoji, yeah he can come off very cold at times

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HotPinkNinjaOfDoom [2007-11-14 02:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww poor Jun :C

I like the pic though, and the colouring style gave it a nice effect

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Dahdtoudi In reply to HotPinkNinjaOfDoom [2007-11-14 02:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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HotPinkNinjaOfDoom In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 03:19:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem C:

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