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Dahdtoudi — Take me with you

Published: 2007-11-13 23:52:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3879; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 10
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Description ~*~...Take me with you ~*~

Kyoji sat in boredom against the wall of the ravine, another long day of training had passed and he was almost certain he had learned everything he could from his trainer, Katsumi. He had already decided, tonight would be his last night with the group.

He would miss Katsumi the most, she was like his actual mother no matter how hard she was on him. He had even grown quiet close to his teammates. The spunky and loud mouth guy, Toyo and his sweeter teammate Jun.

His decision was final, he had to learn more, he had to become stronger. Kyoji had planned on leaving for Konoha to be trained by the same person that trained his real mother, Lady Tsunade. Unfortunately she was someone not easily found and had disappeared from Konoha a couple years earlier. His next choice was a student of hers, even rumored to be more skilled than Tsunade herself. Sakura Haruno. Kyoji would find her and prove he could make a worthy student.

Kyoji’s ear twitched when he heard footsteps approaching his position, it was obviously Jun, each step she took seemed so unsure but she kept walking closer anyways.

Jun finally stopped, standing straight across from Kyoji. She held a small basket of fruits out in front of her, she had brought it in hopes of sharing it with him. “Kyoji….I…”

Before she could even finish Kyoji spoke up, “I’m not hungry.”

Jun’s eyes saddened for a moment, he hadn’t even opened his eyes to look up at her, he hadn’t even given her a chance. “But you haven’t eaten all day.”

Kyoji’s eyes remained closed as he sat in silence for a few more moments. He would have kept his cold appearance if it wasn’t for the fact she hadn’t moved. She was still just standing there, looking down at him. He hated it whenever they were alone together, he always seemed to find it hard to breath, especially when he saw her smile. Deep down he knew exactly what his true feelings were, but he didn’t want to admit them to her.

Jun took a small step forward and sat in front of him, “Come on, just eat something and I’ll leave ok?”

He could actually hear her smiling as she spoke so he finally decided to look up at her. His eyes shifted from her own, down to the fruit then he shook his head and remained silent.

Jun wasn’t unaware of Kyoji’s plans, in fact the whole group knew. He was acting more cold than usual and she knew why. “…You’re planning on leaving soon, aren’t you?”

Kyoji stared back at her, looking her square in the eyes as he spoke, “Tonight is the last night I will stay here.”


Jun swallowed hard and felt her heart throb more painfully than ever, there was no doubt in her mind, she loved Kyoji. She had spent every day with him for the past 4 years, she had even been here a whole year longer than Toyo, their other male teammate. She felt tears rising to her eyes and tried her hardest not to release them. “What? But that’s so soon…don’t you want to plan about it some more?”

Kyoji saw the sadness in her eyes and had to look away, he hated the feelings he had for her and refused to submit to them. “If you’re going to cry just leave, Katsumi is not the only person that finds that annoying. My decision is final.”

His words cut her deep, she actually felt a tear slip from her eyes, “It’s final?…Then Kyoji, I want to go with you.”

Kyoji’s eyes narrowed but he didn’t look back at her, “No… you are part of the reason I want to leave.”

Jun’s grip tightened on her little basket as a slight gasp escaped her, “What? You want to leave because of me?”

Kyoji sighed a little annoyed before his voice grew more cold, “I hate the way you make me feel, I hate that whenever I try to sleep I dream about you.” He got to his feet and glared down at her, “I hate it when I look at you….and find it hard to breath.”

Jun’s eyes widened in shock as she got to her feet, leaving her basket on the ground and stepping closer to Kyoji, “But….Kyoji, that’s love….and I feel it too but I don‘t hate it.”

Kyoji felt her embrace him, he even felt her silent tears seeping through his shirt but he did not hug her back.

“Kyoji, I love you more than anything….Please…” Jun was cut short once again as Kyoji’s cold words cut her deeper than ever.

“Love does not exist, that was one of my first lessons. It is a confusing illusion that will only get you hurt.” His hands were gentle as he pushed her away from him, “I will never love you Jun.” He turned and left, leaving Jun to stand in the ravine.

Jun stared at his back as he walked away from her and felt her anger rise, “How could you say that?!” She knew he wouldn’t turn and answer, she knew he would never acknowledge her feelings, even if he felt the same way.

Kyoji kept walking forward, no matter how heavy his heart felt, he would not accept the feeling nor look back at Jun.

End???

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There's the little story that goes with it
Sux but couldn't resist.
I love the relationship between Sakura and Sasuke
so Kyoji and Jun are gonna have something similar. Only
poor Jun was already completely rejected and I don't think after that...she's gonna really like Kyoji as much

So this is the first time most of you have even heard of Jun
she is the female teammate of Kyoji's, Toyo is the other male and he's still in the developing stage...like I have no clue what he's gonna look like yet XD I'll try to get a better pic of Jun done too

She's one of my fav characters now, she will be a genjutsu specialist. She's very sweet and feisty, Kinda Tenten's personality but even nicer....most of the time, she can have her bitch fits

Jun, Kyoji, image and story (c) Me ^ ^
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Comments: 104

AsWierdAsItGets In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 02:37:26 +0000 UTC]

wow you're so good at writing, it was like i could see that whole scene happen in my head, the picture really made it come to life.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to AsWierdAsItGets [2007-11-14 02:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sooo much

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AsWierdAsItGets In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 02:53:41 +0000 UTC]

^^ you're welcome

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legomyedo In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 02:32:13 +0000 UTC]

I don't realy like sakura but Jun sounds so much more sure of herself and sounds like she could be indipendent so thats what makes me like this character. Idunno I just don't much like Sasusaku or Narusaku. Hmm. But yeah this character sounds realy cool and not one of those "Oh! I need you! I shall die without you!" Type but more the "I love you but if your gunna be an ass about it then screw you!" and that type is a REAL woman.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to legomyedo [2007-11-14 02:50:01 +0000 UTC]

XD Yes! That is exactly her! She is the type to say, "screw you then" XDD
and thank you

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legomyedo In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-15 12:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Woot! Well your welcome.

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JiraiyaTehGirl In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 01:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Aw, poor Jun. But then, poor Kyoji, so confused, so twisted. *Glomp gravitating towards angst*

So I guess Jun isn't at ALL like Jun of Avatar....

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Dahdtoudi In reply to JiraiyaTehGirl [2007-11-14 02:52:24 +0000 UTC]

XDD Thanks and no, she's nothing like her XDD

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Bluelittleprinc [2007-11-14 01:27:26 +0000 UTC]

omg >< so sad that would hurt me alot if that happens 2 me >>

awesome pic btw! even thougth that was kinda harsh that Kyoji said 2 Jun ><

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Bluelittleprinc [2007-11-14 02:52:44 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you and yes, he can be cold -__-

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Bluelittleprinc In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 20:36:34 +0000 UTC]

well it's not his fault . that's how he is *shudders*

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Pred-Xnentar [2007-11-14 01:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww its such a sweet and sad picture...the story fits perfectly ^^
Awsome job!

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Pred-Xnentar [2007-11-14 02:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soo much

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Pred-Xnentar In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome =3

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zuko-gaara-lover In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 01:08:47 +0000 UTC]

......I have no words for this-not in a bad way-

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KuraiEclispe In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 01:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so cute! Awesome job! ^-^

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jackalsmoon In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:53:47 +0000 UTC]

the story doesn't suck it's good ,and great job btw ^^

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Dahdtoudi In reply to jackalsmoon [2007-11-14 02:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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jackalsmoon In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 03:23:30 +0000 UTC]

no problem ^^

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B4R [2007-11-14 00:43:39 +0000 UTC]

That was sad! I think there should be more to it. Damn! Kyoji reminds me of Sasuke!! X3

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Dahdtoudi In reply to B4R [2007-11-14 00:45:17 +0000 UTC]

XDD Thanks, There just might be more

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B4R In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 00:48:50 +0000 UTC]

BTW, will Kyoji ever meet Shin or Kya in battle?
I think it would be quite interesting. X3 Also, do they know they have an older, odler brother?

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Dahdtoudi In reply to B4R [2007-11-14 00:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Shin will meet Kyoji in battle, and Shin is the only one that doesn't know about Kyoji, Kya meets Kyoji when she goes to train with her aunt Katsumi But she doesn't tell Shin about him

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B4R In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 00:51:50 +0000 UTC]

XD That should be interesting.

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ToyBoxMelody In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:40:22 +0000 UTC]

HOE CUTE REALLY NICE JOB ^^

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Dahdtoudi In reply to ToyBoxMelody [2007-11-14 00:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^ ^

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ToyBoxMelody In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 00:52:07 +0000 UTC]

YA WELCOME

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IloveGaaraXKyo In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Great pic and little story! I think it's so sad though.... Kyoji is so simular to Sasuke, but I believe Kyoji is a LITTLE bit nicer then Sasuke was~

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Dahdtoudi In reply to IloveGaaraXKyo [2007-11-14 00:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^ ^ Yeah He's a little nicer XDD sometimes

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IloveGaaraXKyo In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 01:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

PS~I love your ICON! =3

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Dahdtoudi In reply to IloveGaaraXKyo [2007-11-14 02:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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IloveGaaraXKyo In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 21:35:02 +0000 UTC]

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ComicalAddictions In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:25:06 +0000 UTC]

i really love these characters of yours

the story totally completes is and even more I think I simply adore kyoji. He and I share the exact same beliefs on 'love'

fantastic yo!

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Dahdtoudi In reply to ComicalAddictions [2007-11-14 00:32:17 +0000 UTC]

XDD Thank you

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jaljello In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Sasuke and Sakura scene~ xD
Either way I love it. :3

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Dragonroar [2007-11-14 00:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, it reminds me of Sasuke, but doesn Kyoji still gets along with her, even though he doesn't love him?

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Dragonroar [2007-11-14 00:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah they did get along....but I don't know about anymore XD

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ArticTiger [2007-11-14 00:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww how cute love the short story of this too

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Dahdtoudi In reply to ArticTiger [2007-11-14 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ArticTiger In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 01:12:41 +0000 UTC]

No Problem

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JBarnzi88 In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 00:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Your story was fine, I thought it was sweet,
if not a tad tragic, and well written!

And Jun sounds like an awesome character too

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Dahdtoudi In reply to JBarnzi88 [2007-11-14 00:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soo much

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JBarnzi88 In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 00:14:52 +0000 UTC]

welcome XD

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DreamPanic [2007-11-14 00:03:08 +0000 UTC]

That is so cute! I really like it. Kyoji seems a lot nicer than Sasuke, though... hm. I loved reading the story that went with it! Very wonderful job! =] The walls of the ravine look kind of like curtains... like I could do better.

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Dahdtoudi In reply to DreamPanic [2007-11-14 00:03:43 +0000 UTC]

XDD Thank you, Yeah I needed to make them more jagged or something XDD

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Ultamia [2007-11-14 00:02:33 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME! and NOW I know how Jun LOOKS LIKE and..Kyoji you bastard!!! XD

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Dahdtoudi In reply to Ultamia [2007-11-14 00:03:07 +0000 UTC]

XDDD He's so mean sometimes! XDD LOL
He get's it all from Katsumi XDD

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Ultamia In reply to Dahdtoudi [2007-11-14 00:03:59 +0000 UTC]

XD oh my...

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KH2naruto In reply to ??? [2007-11-13 23:57:29 +0000 UTC]

This was sad yet cute at the same time, for some reason to me XD Great job!!!! And the pic's adorable!!! ^^

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Dahdtoudi In reply to KH2naruto [2007-11-13 23:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sooo much

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