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this punch just for you uuuuuuuuu and plenty more coming beautiful shes so hot
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Yeah
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your welcome i love it
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"Heh, sure thing." Fighting back.
Again, excellent pic.
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Aha! Straight to our face! Well, if I had to be challenged at a boxing match, it's from her that I would like to be defeated and put down!
Great work on rendering and even on the pose! Great result!
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You're very welcome, buddy! This is a very interesting series!
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Lovely work. I like the pose, face expression and the use of DoF. Lighting is also quite good but I would suggest some improvement.
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Thank you, glad you do
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Minor things, and some of those are not 'cast in stone' things. Just personal taste.
First, the scene seems to have multiple lights sources, at least two I would say, which is ok being... "the picture"... taken on a ring, but they create some funny shadows. I'm referring to those two thin lines you can notice on her body just under her right armpit, and to the dark shadow under her right arm. It's ok to use one main light, I like that, but I prefer to angle it in a way that the shadows created make her curves more pronounced. I would have used also a rim light at the back to highlight her outline. That makes the character jumping out of the picture tremendously.
Also, for humans (and especially for women) I prefer to use soft shadows. You can do that by increasing the size of the light so the shadow is softer. Emitters are very good at that.
As for the figure itself, I would have added some movement to her hairs that kind of follow the punch. I would have also modified some details: for instance, the way the bra is sticking on her body. This is a common problem for conforming clothes. Easier to use but they to not fit realistically at the body. Dynamic clothes are much better to that respect. When I cannot use dynamics, I tend to morph the clothes making them fit more naturally. For instance, the back strap of her bra would have probably stretched straight from her Brest to her back muscle rather than stick on the skin like that. Same for the neck straps and for those in between her breasts (although not that much noticeable due to her position).
Like I said, these are minor details but in a close look scene, these are things that can be noticed.
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Thank you, these are really excellent pointers and thoughts 
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You are welcome.
This is what, I believe, dA should be all about. Post your work, get some tips (some are good, some are less good but always worth to be checked), improve your work, repeat
I learnt a lot from other artists suggestions and I always welcome them when they come.
Keep up the good work
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