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Published: 2008-02-12 04:16:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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SNOWI see the white snow falling
people are playing in it
but all I feel is pain inside
I dont think I can ever be happy
the one I love is not here
I love her so much
yet it can not be
it is in my heart that we are ment for each other
but I cant bring myself to exept it
the love, it is there
but I just cant grasp it
the love, it is there
I stand on the side of a bridge
saying last words
words of sorrow
I see nothing stopping me
then there was a voice
it called to me
not to jump
I turned to look and there she was
the love of my life was there to save me
she told me not to jump
yet my foot slipped
and I let go of life
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really good story, needs better word choice though, some part seems rather...i can't find the word for it. for example at the "I don't think I can ever be happy", sounds a little like elementary kids writing 
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how about....I can never find eternal love.....
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