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Description "HAHA~! Nice to meet you all! I am known as Hayate!" I laughed, running a hand through my matted black hair as I introduced myself to my fellow classmates. "I love writing, technology, chatting, friendship and women!" I mentally punched myself across the face. The laughter of the others cut through me like a knife, and I sat back down with a sigh. 'I always have to make a laughingstock of myself, don't I?' Shrugging, I shook my head with a laugh. A chance glance to my left is what prompted me to see her. There was a really cute blond girl sitting just off to the side, in the row behind me. She was staring at me oddly. I turned back around, looking down at myself. An old, black FullMetal Alchemist long sleeve coupled with a pair of pale jeans wouldn't have attracted that kind of stare, would it? 'Nah, most likely not.'

Throughout the class, I would feel a stare on my back every now and again. I didn't have to turn around to see it was that blond chick, either. 'What is her problem?' I wondered, feeling both embarrassed and irritated. 'If something's bothering her, I wish she'd just say it already. Not that I know her personally.'

As soon as the class ended, I turned around to say something only to find that she'd already disappeared. "What the hell...?" I looked around curiously to see if I could find her, but as I had noted before, she had just disappeared. "That's kind of...freaky."

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'Another day, another chapter to write.' I smirked slightly, passing under a high bridge as I proceeded to my house, walking along a small riverbank. There were a few houses in the distance. I kept an eye out for snakes and other critters that would hide in tall grass as I daydreamed. 'Wonder what new surprises will be in store for me today?' Slowing to a stop, I looked around curiously, something causing the hairs on the back of my neck to stand at attention. 'Something's off. Why does it feel like this spot is supercharged with electricity?' Jumping from shock, I reflexively spun, a kick catching a...dog? on the snout, knocking it to the floor.

"What the hell's going on here?" I shouted to no one in particular. I couldn't just feel the electricity anymore; I could see it building all around me in a wide circle, pulsing in time to my breaths. I jerked my legs, trying to run out of the circle, but the electricity kept me pinned. I couldn't move my legs! My arms were free, but my legs were stuck, frozen to the floor. "Oh come on!! This is seriously not faiir!!" I threw my head back shouting, before the surrounding grass and houses vanished.

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When I next opened my eyes, I saw myself floating in a sea of night. I could see nothing but the symbol I was standing on. There were no trees. No grass. No people. Nothing. All I could see was a black void. "What's happening? What's going on?" I didn't have long to wonder; An electric shock ran through my body, paralyzing me. I fell to the 'floor' limply, struggling to breath. My eyes felt like lead. My arms and legs wouldn't move. "What's go...ing on...?" Was the last I had time to wonder before my eyes closed.

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Sensation started to come back. A soft, smooth mattress. The feeling of a warm blanket on my back. The scent of fresh steamed milk. After several minutes of struggling, I finally managed to open my eyes. It was fuzzy, but I could see what looked like a table, looming far over me, and sitting at that table was a...girl? No way. She was way too tall. She had cat ears and a tail also. Though if I thought about it, my bed felt like skin...

I grimaced, sitting up. I could feel the catgirl's blue eyes staring at me. I had apparently been sleeping on her leg, with her tail acting as my blanket.

"Should I be worried?" I wondered out loud. My only answer was her giggle.

I stared up at the girl, backing away nervously as she smiled down at me. "W-Who are you?" I asked, struggling to keep the tremor from my voice as she smiled, her cat ears raised high.

"Me? I'm Twixy! It's nice to meet you, Hayate!" She patted me on the head somewhat roughly, staggering me from the force. "Heheh, you really are such an adorable little human, aren't you?" She smiled teasingly, her hand slowly reaching for the back of my shirt.

I turned on the spot, a sense of fear turning my stomach cold as ice as I leaped, barely avoiding the hand. I rolled, nearly falling off of her knee as I tried to get back on my feet, scrabbling at the flesh. Glancing up, I saw her hand chasing after me, and did the first thing I could think of; turning, I leapt with everything I had, soaring through the air as I reached for one of the table’s legs. I never made it that far.

Her tail lashed out faster then a whip, wrapping around me as she stood up. "Now, now, now. I didn't give you permission to run away, now did I?" She smiled mischievously, licking her lips as she passed from one room to another, sitting on a bed. I thrashed in her hand, kicking as best as I could. "Bad, bad Hayate...You'll have to be punished..." She laid down, smiling as my struggles kicked up tenfold.

"Damn it...come on...come ON!!" I muttered, panick rising steadily as I saw where her tail was headed; right for a crash course with her open mouth. But it was no good. No matter how much I tried, no matter how much I struggled, there was nothing I could do. I felt her hot breath pass over my body as the moist cave opened ever wider. "No, no, no, no, NO!" I clung onto her tail as it loosened, opening. I looked back over my shoulder just in time to see the opening of her mouth close as I plopped onto her tongue. I barely had time to get my bearings before her tongue started moving, swishing and moving me about her mouth, suckling on me as she played. "This isn't-" I growled, trying to keep away from her throat as saliva coated me. She pinned me to the roof of her mouth, her giggles echoing in the tight chamber, deafening me. "This can't be happening..."

I shook my head, trying to shove her tongue away as saliva coated me. I was finding it harder and harder to move as I tried to stumble away, panic squeezing my lungs shut. I yelped, tripping on her tooth before she caught me on her tongue, licking at my chest and neck hungrily, scratching me in the process as the hooks caught on to me. It wasn’t deep enough to bleed, but it still hurt. I stumbled up to my feet, my breath short as I bumped into her teeth, punching at it. My hands started to sting as they hit the unyielding enamel. After a few more hits I sighed, stopping as I sunk down to my hands and knees, leaning against it. “I…I can’t break free…can I?” I shivered slightly, feeling my will starting to drain out of me. The next thing I knew, there was a flash of light as her lips parted, and her fingers coming in to pick me out. She lifted me out, dangling me in front of her face as she frowned. “You’re not supposed to give up that easily!” She shouted at me, scowling.

I shivered, still terrified as Twixy set me down on the bed. She kept her hand close to me for a moment, long enough to make sure that I wasn't going to bolt before she walked to her kitchen to retrieve something.

I shuddered overwhelmed. As soon as Twixy disappeared through the door, I raced to the edge of the bed. I stopped, glancing over the edge at the ground far, far below. "Oh man, What am I gonna do? Who knows what she'll do when she gets back!" I glanced around hurriedly, seeking some path to refuge. Unfortunately, there were none.

Hearing Twixy clear her throat behind me, I turned. My stomach went cold as she fixed me with an menacing glare. "Did I say you could move?" She stormed over, her footsteps crashing loudly, driving terror into my flesh. I could feel the fear swallowed down his rising fear, turning to confront the seething catgirl. I didn’t see it earlier, but she definitely seemed to be carrying something behind her back. I cried out as she pulled it out, turning without seeing what it was, attempting to escape.

I didn’t get far at all before Twixy's hand smashed down on me. I cried out, vision spinning wildly as I was slammed into the bed. I thought I heard Twixy say something, but my ears were roaring too loudly for me to make it out. As my vision started to clear, I shook my head in time to be greeted by her scowling visage. Her face was close enough that I could’ve reached out and touched her.

"Hey, are you ok?" Despite the fact she still looked pissed, I still felt a bit of real concern in her voice. I was too winded to respond, and the headrush was making me nauseous, but I still managed to nod, albeit hesitantly. I flinched as she brought up her other hand. After a moment I realized that she was holding a small cookie.

Well, it was small by her standards, anyway. It was still at least half as tall as I was. "Twixy...why are you giving me a giant cookie?"

"I remember you saying sometime ago that food calms you down when you're scared. Are you going to eat it or not?"

I looked at the cookie, then at Twixy and back, not really knowing what to do. "So...I have to eat this all by myself?"
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Comments: 9

29238 [2010-04-15 13:54:25 +0000 UTC]

this is really good. you kept my interest the whole time. cant wait for you to continue it.

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daimondstrike In reply to 29238 [2010-04-15 15:51:47 +0000 UTC]

So I shall ^^ My thanks for reading! =3

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29238 In reply to daimondstrike [2010-04-15 16:04:32 +0000 UTC]

your welcome. keep up the great work

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AmericanHalo [2010-04-15 11:15:23 +0000 UTC]

I do say that was a very enjoyable read keep up the fantastic work instant fav!! ^.^

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daimondstrike In reply to AmericanHalo [2010-04-15 15:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I shall! XD (btw, if you havn't noticed already, I tend to do a lot of silly comments.)

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AmericanHalo In reply to daimondstrike [2010-04-15 18:04:53 +0000 UTC]

lol I think it's cool!

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JoeyTheNeko [2010-04-14 21:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Me: if I get shrunk I'd help you eat it.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-04-15 04:27:57 +0000 UTC]

lulz, who's shrunk?

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-04-15 04:29:13 +0000 UTC]

it's you in that pic right? *suddenly realizes I'm tiny* oh crap. O.O

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