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Name: Hayate Takamachi MaeharaAge: 18
Race: Kitsune boy
Gender: Male
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 117 lbs
Hair Color: His hair is silver in color.
Hair Style: His hair is straight, reaching down to his shoulders on the back, and just past his ears on the sides. His bangs and the top of his head spike up, despite his best efforts to tame his admittedly wild hair.
Eye Color:Β Β His left eye is red, and his right eye is grey.
Physical Build: His body is very athletic. Despite his admittedly thin frame, strength surges in his wiry muscles. He has little or no fat to speak of.
Attire: His standard clothing is a short sleeve black T-Shirt with a skull on it, long dark blue jeans that reach almost to the floor, and a dark green cotton jacket.
Personality: Cheerful and upbeat, there is little, if anything that can bring this young man down! He tends to act playful and carefree whether around friends or complete strangers, but depending on the situation, he can exhibit a very serious and stern countenance. He tends to feel obligated to help others, and he doesn't believe that people should have to suffer for no reason. He often goes out of his way to help a friend that's in serious danger, even if he's the only one. He's impossible to irritate in, well, just about any way. He seems to have an almost non existant temper.
Other Features: He has a very girly face. Most people are unable to tell whether he's a guy or a girl at first glance simply because his very body itself resembles a very flat chested girl. His girly voice doesn't help matters either. A guy that could look very good in a skirt or a dress, much to his friends annoyance.
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Comments: 22
Mindless-Spctr [2010-06-21 00:29:28 +0000 UTC]
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I suppose now, the critique will fall on me huh? Very well.
I've only watched the first episode of the series since reading this and I have to admit I am still very unfamiliar with many of the terms. Still, the fact of the matter is that I love the fact you use exact measurements in describing the weapon or I.D. which still escapes me at the moment.
You were much more detailed in this one than I have seen you since I started watching you.
All in all this is good but I think you need to work with more complex character sheets when you can get the chance. It will challenge your imagination and get your brain working in ways you never thought possible.
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29238 [2010-06-21 04:43:37 +0000 UTC]
this is very good. i like it.
though i still dont really understand the Velken style of magic
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PrincessKooh [2010-06-20 07:06:31 +0000 UTC]
Awesome this hayate kicks butt! Anyway i can relate to him on the girl thing and also hey girly anime can be awesome too! *puts on mew mew power aka tokyo mew mew*
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daimondstrike In reply to PrincessKooh [2010-06-20 07:09:25 +0000 UTC]
There are NO animes better then Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. Trust me, you gotta watch it!
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PrincessKooh In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 15:25:38 +0000 UTC]
Btw have you gotten my club invite yet? And have you accepted? I havent been able ta visit the club since thursday
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daimondstrike In reply to PrincessKooh [2010-06-20 15:57:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, I got your invitation! My thanks, I shall perform to the best of my abilitOh yeah, I got your invitation! My thanks, I shall perform to the best of my abilitOh yeah, I got your invitation! My thanks, I shall perform to the best of my abilitOh yeah, I got your invitation! My thanks, I shall perform to the best of my ability!
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PrincessKooh In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 20:02:59 +0000 UTC]
Cool and youre welcome! No presure! Oh and if ya can try too please try ta get , , and ta join as either members or contributors preferably. Also feel free to post your writings and stuff on the club and enjoy
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PrincessKooh In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 15:22:19 +0000 UTC]
Trust me i want too but i cant find any english dub, fan dub or even decent i.e. Readable subs. as 4 better well we all have our opinions.
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JoeyTheNeko [2010-06-20 07:05:53 +0000 UTC]
Masaki: hey. many people say my dad from our verse is a genderswapped magical girl anime as well. so I kinda LIKE the idea of a mage man.
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 07:12:27 +0000 UTC]
Masaki: hi again. I got ike to promise not to try to kill you again.
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-06-20 07:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Hayate: That's good... *still keeping a hand on his collar*
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 07:27:29 +0000 UTC]
Masakii: so I brought you this to aplogize. *hands him a box of his favorite candy*
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-06-20 07:29:35 +0000 UTC]
Hayate: Oooh!! Chocolate truffles!!!
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 07:30:19 +0000 UTC]
Masaki: again. sorry about before. anything else I can do to make it up to you? *her stomach growls and she blushes*
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LordHiro [2010-06-20 06:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah, you finally made a final bio for him, or so I hope. I canβt wait to see how this version comes into play with some of your work.
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daimondstrike In reply to LordHiro [2010-06-20 07:05:04 +0000 UTC]
You've seen this version in use before. This is similar to that first version that I started out with. The only reason I kept changing him so much is because you kept expressing distaste over it.
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LordHiro In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-20 07:08:00 +0000 UTC]
Why would you care what I think? That sounds like bad writing to me, Trace. You were the one who told me that a good writer does not care what one thinks about their work. I learned that from you and I find it strange that you could not follow the advice you gave me. Important thing is that I want you to learn to not give a crap about what people like me think and that you love your characters in whatever form, fashion, or way you create/represent them.
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sashima [2010-06-20 06:58:48 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I like all the different powers! I would hate to have to fight him lol
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sashima In reply to daimondstrike [2010-06-21 04:50:18 +0000 UTC]
*grins* Don't make me break out my spirit dagger! I'll drain your soul!
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