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Published: 2010-08-17 00:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 389; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Just a random picture of Kara I drew today. Gonna color it and such later. FIrst drawing I actually liked, but please critique it, otherwise how'll I get better?Related content
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Mindless-Spctr [2010-08-17 01:25:34 +0000 UTC]
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You asked for it and I'll be gentle since this is your first real drawing critique from me. Well I can honestly see that you've given it your best and the results are very promising. Geometric shapes are a good base to use when constructing the skeleton of the person but you have to remember that the human body and by extension the neko body is an organic shape comprised of at least 4 or 7 different geometrical shapes which also includes the fingers. The head is actually an oval, egg shape that is not conveyed here.
Anyhow, for a first time you've done quite a good job.
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AmethystMuse [2010-08-17 05:15:39 +0000 UTC]
This isn't too bad. Is this your first time drawing her?
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daimondstrike In reply to AmethystMuse [2010-08-17 05:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, actually. I had to use nekochank's picture as a reference, since I have a problem just drawing straight from my head, but I drew it myself. (I was using my DS to get the reference at the time.)
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AmethystMuse In reply to daimondstrike [2010-08-17 05:21:52 +0000 UTC]
I see. Pretty good for your first time.
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daimondstrike In reply to AmethystMuse [2010-08-17 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanksu!!
Kara: ... are you in your chat room?
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AmethystMuse In reply to daimondstrike [2010-08-17 05:30:18 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and I'm not in the chat room, yet.
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daimondstrike In reply to AmethystMuse [2010-08-17 05:31:06 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to sound like TryMeIke, but mind if I go in, if you do go?
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AmethystMuse In reply to daimondstrike [2010-08-17 05:32:43 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and sure.
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LordHiro [2010-08-17 02:39:07 +0000 UTC]
I may not be able to comment your written work right now, but I can sure comment this. It is a pretty good drawing. I like it. It is a whole lot better than anything I could do.
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