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WARNING MY FRIENDS! VORE COMIN UP BEHIND YA! IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT IS TURN AWAY AND FLEE BEFORE THY INNOCENCE BE LOST FOREVER!Hayate yawned sleepily, locking the door behind him as he exited the house. He hated getting up in the mornings, but because he still had to go to school, he didn't really have much choice. "Man, I can't wait for graduation! Finally, I can sleep in...I am most definitely not a morning person..." He walked out to the curb, nostrils taking in the scent of the fresh air. "Eh? Wait...why do I smell neko?"
"Hello, little one."
Hayate jumped, turning around to see a pink furred giantess neko, looking over a nearby house. "Oh, what a surprise!" Hayate shouted, waving until he saw the girl's mouth widen in a hungry smile. "H-Hey, what brings you all the way here to see me...?" Hayate ran a hand through his silver hair, suddenly wishing he had something to drink. His instinct was telling him to run, but he stayed, mostly cuz he'd always seen her as a friend; at least until he realized she was looking at him the way a cat would a mouse.
Kri smiled widely, glancing up at the horizon. "Oh, I was just wondering if you could help me with a certain problem..." She smiled smugly, evidently expecting a reply, but instead recieved only silence. When she looked, she realized that Hayate had taken to flight, and that he was already a few blocks away. "That little...it's rude to run away when someone's talking to you!" She shouted in a huff, chasing after him.
/Damnitdamnitdamnitdamnit DAMN IT! How the hell do I get out of this mess!?/ Flashed through Hayate's mind briefly, but the time for thinking was long over. He slid low to the ground, vaulting over a head high wire mesh fence, touching down in a roll on the otherside, and ran towards the house. Kri followed close behind, every movement lined with infinite grace as she energetically chased after her prey. Dashing through the half-heartedly tended flowerbed, Hayate grabbed a few garden spikes, littering them behind him before leaping over yet another fence. Kri kept running the whole time, the garden spikes meaning no more to her then a pebble would to the human. Dashing through the next yard, Hayate stopped, hopping onto a lunging doberman's head before leaping for the next fence. When the dog's owner stepped outside to see what all the barking was about, all he saw was a pink furred cat tail rapidly disappearing from his backyard. Hayate on the other hand, was sprinting on the next house's roof when the unexpected happened; as he was crossing the tile roof, he passed right in front of a brick chimney, disturbing the flock of birds within. Aflutter, they flew out of the chimney, almost making Hayate lose his footing. Kri 'pounced' on the oppertunity splendidly, knocking him from the roof and pinning him under her hand in one fell swoop.
"Geez, Hayate. I just wanted to introduce you to someone; my stomach!" She lifted Hayate towards her mouth, but a sudden pain erupted in her thumb. He'd actually had the gall to bite her! She tightened her grip on him relentlessly, almost killing him then and there from the sheer force. After a few seconds, sure that he was done fighting, she lifted him to her mouth again. She pressed her tongue against him, taking in his sweet flavor happily. A sudden kick surprised her so much that it made her drop her prey, who once again took off running, hardly slowed down at all from the crushing. "Oh come on! Stop resisting and feed me already!" She whined, chasing after him again. /What the hell is his body made of, steel? He shouldn't be able to move after that!/
Hayate's body, flooded with adrenaline, hardly registered the pain as he ran, crashing through a rotten wooden fence. Splinters danced in front of him, but he ran on, heedless. Glancing to the left, he spotted a decent size copse of trees, most likely someone's apple orchard. Turning, he ran into the orchard, hoping to at least slow down his pursuer. Unfortunately, Kri's footsteps crushing the trees before her like matchsticks echoed in his ears. Desperately, he put on a burst of speed, racing with all his might towards the closest possibility of safety; a small cave in a ridge well over a mile away. He glanced behind him, seeing Kri's paws crashing to the ground just behind him. Any other person probably would've just given up at that point, tired and beaten, but Hayate just turned, putting his head down, and ran even harder. After a moment, he realized that Kri's footsteps had disappeared, and turned to see where the attack was coming from. A shadow loomed over him, and he realized that Kri had simply jumped, pummeling him to the ground under her as she came down in a crouch, landing hands first. "Oh no! Dammit, don't tell me I killed him!" Kri cursed, lifting her paw. There lay Hayate, quite beaten, but by the same token, quite alive.
He glanced up, groaning in pain as Kri picked him up by his leg, pain assualting his body from every pore. /Dammit, is this the end? Someone, help me!/ Hayate thought, groaning. He forced his arms to move as he punched at Kri's hand, but it was too late. With a great smile, she raised him over her mouth, dropping him in. Her tongue danced over his bruised body, taking in his taste. "Aw, he doesn't taste as good as when I licked him... I told you to stop moving..." Kri sighed, licking her friend over anyway, as much to soothe his injuries as it was to enjoy his taste. With a successful smile, she tilted her head back, swallowing.
Hayate felt himself pass through a large, wet tunnel, Kri's powerful throat muscles pushing him down well past the point of no return in mere seconds. He turned, hearing kri's heartbeat as he passed by her heart. Before long, he felt himself pass through a large opening, dropping into the stomach. He stood up, slogging through the muck as her stomach started to wake up, feeling his presence. He forced himself to calm down, forcing an image of a sword to pass through his mind as he clenched his fist. He moved as if to punch, but he never even started the motion. /Dammit! I can't do it. I just can't...I'm doomed.../
On the outside, Kri giggled, feeling her stomach's new inhabitant beating against her stomach from the inside, tickling her. Patting her stomach, she lay back and considered her options. /Spit him out later after he struggles some more, or leave him there to die?/ She giggled, well aware what she was going to do. She put her back to a tree. Her stomach groaned, Hayate's struggles kicking up tenfold.
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Comments: 69
dragoneater221 [2013-02-16 01:52:18 +0000 UTC]
I will save you!!!!!! -cuts open stomach- you is saved!!!!!
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CatriamFlockentanz [2012-09-27 12:16:06 +0000 UTC]
She should spit him out.
I mean:Would you digest your tiny friend? I seriously not! I would eat him up,surely but I would never allow myself to kill him!
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Lawbreaker911 [2012-06-21 20:50:47 +0000 UTC]
You: Help me! I'm about to get eaten by a giant cat woman!
Me: Meh. *continues to eat popcorn as Kri devours you*
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CatriamFlockentanz In reply to Lawbreaker911 [2012-09-27 12:17:22 +0000 UTC]
XDDDDDDD
Great statement!
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jack-toon-master [2012-01-24 12:39:01 +0000 UTC]
I will attack Kri with Zeno like I did Crisis.
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JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 22:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Me: she should let you out before you digest. you are suppose to be friends.
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 22:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, well, being friends with Kri doesn't mean she'll spit you out.
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-18 22:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Me: so she'd kill you? then your not friends.
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 22:51:36 +0000 UTC]
With Kri, killing you in a relatively gentle way like this IS being a friend. >_> If she tortures you, she hates you.
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-18 22:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Me: why not just not kill him at all? I don't want friends who would kill me for some minor nutrients. that's not what a FRIEND would do. a FRIEND would not kill anyone who they liked. or they can't be called a friend.
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]
it's a fantasy >.> Don't take it so seriously.
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-18 22:55:19 +0000 UTC]
Me: just in case it does become real. like shrink rays. I'd still have to think about it. *backing away still*
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 22:56:14 +0000 UTC]
*Hayate smiled, stepping forward, snatching you up.* Now, let's hear you scream...
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-18 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]
Me: uh. not going to happen. I'm not a person who likes to do that.
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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-18 23:00:00 +0000 UTC]
*shrugs, dropping you into his mouth as he chewed.*
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-19 17:43:21 +0000 UTC]
Me: *after being chewed but not being damaged due to ring* can you let me out now?
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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-18 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]
Me: owowowowowowow! *hurts like hell, but not damaged due to my ring*
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FS-the-voresmith [2010-01-14 12:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Ah, she should just digest him. Not a bad story. It's nice to see the chase. The prey proves ressourceful... but it's not enough to escape the pred!
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daimondstrike In reply to FS-the-voresmith [2010-01-14 15:41:30 +0000 UTC]
No, she managed to catch me anyway, go figure. So fast...
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LordHiro [2009-12-22 05:37:05 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story. I loved it. I hope I can make a good vore story but it is not my strong point. Oh well. Yours are better anyway. :3
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daimondstrike In reply to LordHiro [2009-12-22 06:15:50 +0000 UTC]
XD Thank you! I don't think you can't do it, though. Just keep trying :3 You just need practice XD Trust me, I've had 3 years of practice.
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daimondstrike In reply to LordHiro [2009-12-22 18:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Besides, compared to My vore sucks... at vore.
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daimondstrike In reply to LordHiro [2009-12-23 06:00:44 +0000 UTC]
<3 Then next you shall be eaten and digested by
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daimondstrike In reply to LordHiro [2009-12-23 06:14:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes! And Kri will absorb your hidden powahs and take ovah da world! XD
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LordHiro In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-23 13:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Hidden powers? What powers? I have powers? O.o
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Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-20 16:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Ah I thought that I recognized the name "Kri" with the comparison that she is a pink Neko Very good story! ^_^ I also do not favor digestion and would have liked to see him live, but how else can the poor thing get her nutrients to keep up her shiny pink fur's gloss?
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-20 16:40:54 +0000 UTC]
Uh...she can eat someone else! Not me, her friend! *beats against the inside of Kri's stomach.* Help a guy out here!
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-20 16:55:36 +0000 UTC]
How would I do that? I too am a Neko, (despite my soon to been changed name). In fact Kri kinda converted me from liking Naga's to liking Nekos sooo much more
I mean even If I did save you you'd probably end up becoming my pet...My pet which I would savor everyday
Though I guess you would not be eaten entirely
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-20 16:59:40 +0000 UTC]
:3 I wouldn't mind being a pet. Save me, and you can be my master! *keeps hitting the walls as the acids start to sap my strength.* HELP!
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-20 17:09:16 +0000 UTC]
Sigh...Fine, but you had better not get me in trouble with Kri, she is teaching me to write vore and giving me tips. :3 *Looks around to make sure nobody is looking* Flesa Rignari! *Suddenly you arwe no longer in Kri's stomach, and in your place are serval confused looking Neera. That was too easy...Where'd he go? <.<
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-20 17:12:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I don't think she'd mind...much. *Hayate swayed unsteadily, falling to his knees on your head.* Damn, I'm dizzy. Well, if you want tips on how to write better in general, I'd be glad to help! *He sighs, trying to get the acids off him.*
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-20 17:22:18 +0000 UTC]
Ah! There you are!
*Picks you up and brings you to eye level* Yech! X_X You smell like...well what you almost became
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-20 17:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, yeah, sorry about that. Havn't had a chance to rinse it off yet. *stares at you, hanging from the back of his jacket.*
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-20 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]
He he! :Giggle: Your hair is funny colored...even for a human. o.o *Rubs it* ^_^
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jfsjfsjfsjfsjfsjfs In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-21 13:49:11 +0000 UTC]
lol
corresponding-continuation-of- story-thing
Yeah
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-21 03:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm...that's a little uncomfortable...plz stop it...
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-21 04:10:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh! ^ ^; Silly me I'm very sorry. I won't do again without your permesion but say...Hopw about we carry on this conversation in a more private place? Say yahoo?
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daimondstrike In reply to Leena-Crimson-Terror [2009-12-21 04:12:13 +0000 UTC]
I have an MSN messenger, not a yahoo though.
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-21 04:26:49 +0000 UTC]
I don't know...I need to ask my freind about that one...<.<;
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Leena-Crimson-Terror In reply to daimondstrike [2009-12-22 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]
Er...Somthing more, but not romaticly? Why do you ask? <.<
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