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Published: 2006-01-12 04:05:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 423; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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and in the grey silence of your eyesi saw the clouds of shadow
that light my sky...
and as it rains inside here,
i learn to see with bandaged eyes,
to feel with my frozen blood;
i walk imitating your steps,
i whisper hearing your voice...
amongst shadows of (the) rain
and silver clouds...
...a blind step into the abyss
...a colorless mirror
once more i give up,
following the echoes of your voice...
(chains
that
will never
break.)
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Comments: 13
very nicely done, you have a good structure, the context is superb. and the message is very sad. how you seem to go from what seems to be a sort of love or adoration, to a depth of depression from what seems to be loss. the metaphorical simbalinces are exquisite. I must say very awsomely done.
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wow. are you serious?
well, thank you!
yeah, i guess its kind of depression because of love
by the way, i'll write you an email soon
see ya!
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very serious indeed hun, you did a great job, you impressed me, and I look forward to more of your poetry.
really? who broke your heart? can I kill them?
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haha, thanks again.
its not his fault. you can kill me instead
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youre always welcome hun.
I wont kill you, never kill you. believe that. protect you maybe but never kill you. you are too sweet of a person.
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haha.. im too sweet of a person??
x) thanks, youre sweet too!
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and yes you are hun,
naw I'm just evil lol
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x)
i guess i do..
btw, i forgot your email adress
send it to me on a note or send me an emal
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sent it hun lol and besides that is ok. hope you are well
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very beautiful.
just because I feel every single word, every single emotion transmitted here.
good work.
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