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dakr0819 — Half a second part 2
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Published: 2014-12-11 10:30:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3465; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 1
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1st panel, didn't have to change much of anything, it seemed a bit awkward but I couldn't find anything too wrong with it. I understood what he was saying, so that is good. (Maybe it's true. But the team isn't the best, not even I can save you at times)
2nd, was pretty good, I would just replace 'got one second' with 'have one second'. I couldn't quite understand the message of ' No,a half second to think' My guess is 'Not a half a second to think' or 'only a half a second to think'
3rd., its good C:
4th, Good C:
5th, You can keep it the way it is, but putting 'This is what we need to do' puts a more stronger message in there, 'should' do and 'need' to do, are different by how strong each words meaning. Need= the medic feels obligated, Should= medic does it because it's his job and nothing else.
6th, "Even your own partner doesn't care about you," This was actually kinda bad, I laughed and I'm really sorry X). the second sentence was just fine though
7th. "Remember, nobody cares about you" "But it is our job to care for the team"
8th. Good! C:
Here you go! I hope I did everything the way you wanted it to be, now one more, I really like this story.
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OHOH! I'm sorry I answer this so slow! I have something stuck in my schedule X__X
I corrected those problems!
I really thank you for helping me to modify these, these sentences become more smoothly!!
About 2nd 'No,a half second to think'
This medic sudden change of mind ,In the Chinese language, the
This can enhance the mood, but I do not know how to use English LOL
OH! Oh my God! I'm a mess XDD I need more time to learn English, anyway thank you!!!!
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Then 2nd is fine! It's very good, we do a very similar thing in English, I just wasn't sure, so its actually VERY GREAT!
Your English is superb! I can understand you, its just you switch words around so you sound like Yoda -->
But you're doing very good! I'll help you any time, it's very fun.
Don't stress too much about having to learn English perfectly, even I have trouble at times, or even great English speakers have a hard time. It's very difficult and I don't blame you for getting it wrong, in fact its impressive how far you've come. Keep going, you're doing awesome!
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Noooo! So sad...😭😭😭😩😩😫😫 still love the artwork tho!😙
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