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Published: 2017-06-30 03:45:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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They look fine to fine!!! The most I could do to critique it, would be the anatomy proportion with like the arms. They kind of bend like Finn's noddle arms x3
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They look better than a lot of other things that you'd see on DeviantArt and you certainly have an interesting artstyle, but I'd say that you need a bit more practice on anatomy and shaping. Usually you want to learn anatomy before drawing in a cartoony style, and judging from proportions, it doesn't look like you took much time into learning anatomy.
Other than that, it looks interesting and is certainly a good break from all of the other garbage that I see on dA.
The main areas that I'm concerned about are the detail areas- hands, feet/shoes, and facial structure. The shoes and hands look somewhat rushed, meanwhile the facial proportions are off a tad. My main concerns are the hands of the second person from the left, where the hands and arms are not the same size, and the fourth person from the left, where the hands look more like mitts.
As I have recommended before, try to learn how to draw the human body anatomically correct before drawing in a cartoony style. It seems like a bit of a chore, but learning it will definitely reflect positive light onto your work.
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Wow! Actual helpful criticism! :3 thank you and I'm still working on my art style so I totally will have to work on hands and shoes ;u; they're hard though.
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You're welcome. It's always difficult to find criticism outside of "you suck" and "this is good" here, so I'm aiming to fix that. Glad you took it well.
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Pfft totally! Its good for people to do that. It helps
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